Falling For - Comments

My heart is broken, funnily enough I'd forgotten what it felt like to have one until I started reading this. Please give this an ending and the sequel you mentioned!

Whatever you do, DO NOT stick to a canon ending. Min and George have come too far and gone through far too much for this to all be over and quite personally I don't think any of us could handle it if they broke up for good. So you'd have a lot of heartbroken readers!

Okay so you leave for like a year, only to come back and break my heart...

seriously?

Bree, why do you try to kill me?? Ugh.

And you always inspire me to write. Why must your writing be so beautiful and heartbreaking? Why do you always make me want to be creative and write? Why, why, why why.

Of course I loved this. Of course I was ready to cry my eyes out. This just cuts so deep. I love these characters and their stories as much as I did when I first started this story.

Oh my god I can't believe you updated - and ugh it's so awful, I almost wish you hadn't stuck to canon because it hurt to read this chapter. But it's a beautiful story, and the whole retrospective element is what makes it unique, so I'm both upset and happy with your decision :3 George's last words were heartbreaking though D: please update soon, I had forgotten how much I loved this story!

Ugh ugh ugh, your writing is always SO perfectly heartbreakingly realistic. What you've managed to capture is brilliant and so tragic- watching your relationship drift and the two of you move on different directions. It happens every day and it's the saddest thing in the world. You've made me root for them from the start knowing how it ends and it's just UGH Keep writing brilliantly, dear!

Ahem...okay...I really shouldn't be talking, after all you've actually posted and I still haven't. But still! You play with my emotions! Dangling a few good chapters then taking them away.

Also...well...yeah. :)

Just logged on after a long time and going to my sub list made me sad seeing most of my favorite writers had stopped writing but then I saw that you had updated this story recently and I nearly jumped for joy!

I love this story and your way of writing. Also you flesh out your characters so well. It really makes me want to root for them and be sad when they are sad or happy when they are happy. Thank you for coming back to this story and I can't wait to read more for it. Actually I think I might go back and read it all again from the beginning because I missed it so much! Keep at it!

You are an amazing writer.

I can't truly find words to explain how amazing you are. Your writing is not only inspiring, but a breath of fresh air. This particular chapter is almost poetic. I just loved it and the feeling of the chapter overall.

I love that Min is jealous. I know that sounds back, but what I mean is that it would be normal for her to be jealous, but it's also great that she acknowledges that she is and that she doesn't want to be. She doesn't want to be that kind of girl - no one would - but sometimes you just can't help it. In my mind, it makes her a stronger character.

I also think it's great that Lee could see what was going on in Min's head. He probably knows it'll lead to trouble.

Great update, of course.

I feel like you're going to make me cry again and I'm so anxious for it to happen because George and Angelina and then Mignon and Noel... Dear god you are a magnificent writer!
Pretty please update!
Ps those paragraph dividers are beautiful

If you break them up. I will cry please do not have George end with Angelina!!!!!!

But good story

It would be incredibly hard to lose a twin. Hard for said twin, and hard for the family. Especially if they are identical. That double take most of them would be taking. I think you're capturing their pain very well.

I can see certain things forming. Their relationship struggling to stay together. Angelina coming in. And as a write it would be easy to throw someone under the bus. But you're not and honestly you're handling it all wonderfully. You could blame George, for his withdrawal. You could blame Mignon, for holding back a little. But no one person is to blame for the strain beginning in their relationship.

I can't wait to read more. I really can't. I'm thinking I'm going to re-read this bad boy. SO excited we're doing this!

omg you updated
you have no idea how long i've been waiting for you to!
that chapter was perfect, the best mix of emotion and description
and the add-in of Angelina was great!
Ugh DON'T YOU DARE DISAPPEAR AGAIN ♥

I love this story. :)

Just found this story and have completely fallen in love with it! You are such an amazing writer and I'm addicted! Will you be continuing this story soon? Please do, it's absolutely brilliant! Can't wait to read what happens next :)

I know this may be a weird thing to comment on, but whenever I see Alison Harvard on the general internet, whether it be on facebook or imgfave or whatever, I immediately think of Mignon.

I think that proves how brilliant this story is.

I just spent all morning reading this and will honestly admit I cried for the whole entire time I was reading about Fred's death. This is so beautiful.

I can't wait to see what happens between Min and George after that chapter that said he wasn't there while she was older. Please update soon!

Brilliant chapter - simple yet effective!:)

“But I don't want fish!” Hahaha, it made me smile. Hopefully it'll get better for poor George soon.

As always, your words captivate and bring me into another world. This story truly s amazing - i don't think I can say that enough.

Please update again soon.