March 24th, 2011 at 06:55am
I'm absolutely in love with your story!! I've been trying to find one worth my time, but I don't really have luck with such. However, I really like yours! :D
Your way of narration keeps me interested. I like how you're descriptive but not so that it's overflowing with adjectives. I also really like Mignon(: I'm not much of a Hufflepuff fan, to tell the truth, but I really like her, seeing as she's adorable and full of humor. And I'm utterly pleased that your writing isn't biased towards her simply because she's an original character. I like that Mignong went right out and explained her flaws and what not.
In addition, I'm happy to say that I like the way Gred and Forge are being described(: Not too insane, yet appropriately mischievious. Ha ha, count how many times I said "I like" XD
Anyway, I've subscribed and will continue reading. Off too chapter three!(:
Yet again, I LOVE the fact that Mignon isn't a perfect OC and how she knows she's not perfect. I like George and Mignon's relationship; I think you're doing an excellent job describing it because at first, it was more of a sexy fling kind of thing (rhyme! XD) but it slowly developed into amoooor(;
This story is honestly just SO addicting, I feel kind of stupid admitting it. Ha ha. Anyhow, I'm in love with this. I love this story, everything about it, it's just so perfect. Oh, and before I forget! Go check out my story!
Ahaaa, kidding!! XD I hate it when people do that in my comment page. Anyhow, might I add that I can't stop listening to "Falling For" by States? Ha ha, I really like the love and the sexy of that song, it's beautiful and fits your story very well(: But anyhow, Ima stop rambling now. UPDATE, UPDATE! (x