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  • BlazeRead

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    NOOOOOOOOO NOT THE NURSE!!!!!!!!!!! GAH! I'll kill lotty if she hurts my blond beauty!
    October 24th, 2011 at 10:19pm
  • Elephant PJs

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    Good chapter but I think your copy and paste went a bit haywire or something. The chapter repeats itself, just so you know. Anyway, looking forward to more as always.
    October 24th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • INACTIVExx

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    hey it's me rebecca_reaper.. I changed my username! I miss u! This is the first story I started reading on Mibba and it has been like a journey!! :D Please Please update sooN!! :B LOVE YA!!
    August 26th, 2011 at 02:32am
  • Elephant PJs

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    It just gets better and better. Why is the end so close?! :( Why?
    (By the way, replying to your comment tomorrow on my day off)
    August 24th, 2011 at 08:49am
  • HiYaLLo!

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    Nice! I liked it a lot. You're really good!
    August 15th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • Elephant PJs

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    Very, very, very good chapter. Like, seriously good. I kept wanting to look behind me while reading it but your explanations for things were perfect and free of holes. It's just sad that the end's in sight but your climax building is very nice. I love it :)
    August 11th, 2011 at 08:57am
  • BlazeRead

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    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! ... that is all.
    August 10th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • Elephant PJs

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    Hey, you don't owe the readers anything. If anything, we owe you.
    And god, I'd be so weirded out if my parents ever swore like Lydia's dad O.O
    August 1st, 2011 at 07:20am
  • Elephant PJs

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    Why do I get the feeling that Lotty was somehow involved in that last bit? Hm?
    But is it seriously almost finished? Not cool dude. I remember when you told me the idea for this thing and it really didn't seem that long ago :/
    July 28th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • lazziebear

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    I have to get off the computer now, but i'll definitely subscribe so i can read it later! Great start tho! :)
    July 25th, 2011 at 01:37am
  • Elephant PJs

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    Great chapter. I got chills towards the end there when Josh suggested she was a demon. Good stuff :)
    Good luck with your wisdom teeth too, they're total bitches :/
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:24am
  • Elephant PJs

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    Fantastic, as usual. I like Lotty even more now, to be quite honest. Keep it up :)
    July 16th, 2011 at 08:58am
  • INACTIVExx

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    OMFG!! I hate you!! I thought by the name of the chapter that lydia was the one that was gonna die ajajajaja great chapter btw :D awesome chica!!
    July 14th, 2011 at 09:00pm
  • INACTIVExx

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    CHICAAAAAAAAAA!! You better the hell update soon!! :D I'm lovin it!!! :D haaaaaaaaa!! :D
    July 14th, 2011 at 12:16am
  • BlazeRead

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    Dingus!!!!!!!!! Dingi!!!!!!!!! lolololol yup.... yay! Mutters* she should so have a crush on sam.... blah.
    June 28th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • Elephant PJs

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    Sam reminds me of myself playing Left 4 Dead...haha. Having a not-so-intense chapter was a nice break actually. Update again soon.
    June 27th, 2011 at 07:40am
  • INACTIVExx

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    I L-O-V-E it!! :D keep ong writing chica!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • BlazeRead

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    *Faints*
    June 20th, 2011 at 09:49pm
  • Elephant PJs

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    Curious, very curious...(imagine that in a Mr Olivander voice) But an interesting chapter indeed. I like Lotty :)
    June 20th, 2011 at 08:33am
  • INACTIVExx

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    I LOVE IT!!
    June 8th, 2011 at 02:52pm