Death is Black and White - Comments

Good chapter and successfully creepy, then again anything to do with the ghost of a little girl is creepy. I kind of cringed when Lydia turned from the normal Lotty brushing her hair to the one in the mirror with the blood flaking and stuff. Well done :) Looking forward to more.

Funny funny. Romeo and Juliet really? Haha. Nice play on english class. Mrs Covelli would be proud.
Update soon!!!

Peace!
-Jane

Nyah!!!! (Glomps Emily) I wuv yooz so much! you made me do my major skip in place happy dance. I don't want to crush your dreams when you see I'm the one who commented, but I cant help it!!! So YAY and I dunno who that person is who you wonder if you sound like........... JK!!! (not really. who is that?) k. that's all. thanks for your time. bye.

Definitely a decent chapter - so wasn't lame. And just so you know, if your style resembled Stephenie Meyer's, I wouldn't be reading it and I doubt many other people would either considering most of the people on this site are above the age of thirteen. Honestly, don't worry about it :) (Sorry I haven't been on lately either, I'll explain when I get the time.)

I'm gettin scared here dude. I love it, but scared... I hope I don't, like, get killed now. That would suck... dunno if I'll sleep tonight... CONTINUE PLEASE!

UUUUUUPPPPPDDDAAATTTTTEEEEE PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!<3

One word to describe that chapter: intense.
Absolutely loved it :D Keep it up.

Great chapter, as usual. Really liked the detail in this one.

THis is really good! :D And I mean REALLY good! :] Cant wait to read some moree! he he lol

Adored the use of the bucket :)

Yesss! Go lotty get rid of thoses spoiled brats for me!

Another great update :D Some really nice development too. Keep it up.

LOLOLOL ROTFLSHIPMPACGU! I think you know that one. That stuff happens to me all the time. well besides the creepy haunting part. What's with the note?????

Okay, that ending was pretty intense. Really nice long chapter. Update again soon :D
That sucks about your computer though, that's simply the worst thing. Maybe you should just kill it and make an insurance claim for a new one >D Just kidding...or not.

Ooh, pretty interesting :) I'm enjoying it so far, update soon!

Very nice and very interesting. Looking forward to more :)