Ever After Never Came - Comments

I can't believe it's over! So much drama and open ends! Need the trequel...or sequel to the sequel...or whatever it's called!

awesome way to finish a story. loved it. :)

Nooo! It cant end like this so sadly ! :((
Poor Alex and jack ://
Bahh, I feel bad for both of them now.
I don't know which side to choose :/
Anywas, loved the story!

Can't wait for the sequel! :))<3

wow so jack found out wow

Wowzers.
I knew this was coming but it still made me sad:(
Are you going to fix them:)
And another update soon? Yay:)
x Tori

Holy shit! Holy shit! Holy shit! I didn't see that coming!
I feel SO bad for jack! :((( I don't care if he said that to her, he had every right!
Alex is pissing me off :P

Anyways, lovely update :)
Update Sooon! I'm SO in love with this story!

awesome update soon please

nice chapter update soon

Hey! Just stopped by to say I LOVE THIS STORY! it's one of my favorites :)))
I feel bad for Alex. :(( I'll get together with him ! XD haha
Anyways, loved the update, :)

xxx.
Marley.

I'm not sure if I think Abby needs to stop being a douche or if Alex needs to stop being a douche or... something. But I definitely think that someone needs to tell Jack somehow, even though I also fear they're all just effed.

Anyway - loved the update! :)

Looks like I'm spoiled, the day I catch up you update ! Lol well Alex was a bit pricky but I would say that it's understandable due to the fact that he probably feels hurt and rejected by Abby but man oh man thi girl needs to figure out how to tel Lisa and jack fast otherwise She's screwed unless maybe Alex was bluffing in the heat if the disagreement

GUESS WHHHHHHAAAAAAT!

.....I"m BACKKKKKKK.

Ok let me start off with--holy hell!
Jack's...shall we say urges, are normal and I guess it's understandable that he wants to have lots of sex etc, but if that's the case he should have ended things with Abby, not fair!
When she smashed his guitar it had me cheering and remembering all the horrible things that he did to her not only in the eleven chapters of this story, but also the things he put her through in the prequel, with Linda etc.
As for Abby sleeping with Alex, I liked it. heehee. Well I knew when she sat with him and he offered her a drink that they were going to sex each other up. Although the funniest thing is, when I was reading it I wasn't considering Abby and Jack's relationship, I was just thinking that Lisa was going to be pissed when she found out! haha, maybe it's because I've been in that scenario in the Lisa position before. Hmm what else...the second sex up scene took me surprise, and I think that an Alex/Abby relationship would be wayyy interesting. Pete's comment about the loud sex cracked me up, and I'm wondering if the Adam character will be reoccuring.
<3

GUESS WHHHHHHAAAAAAT!

.....I"m BACKKKKKKK.

Ok let me start off with--holy hell!
Jack's...shall we say urges, are normal and I guess it's understandable that he wants to have lots of sex etc, but if that's the case he should have ended things with Abby, not fair!
When she smashed his guitar it had me cheering and remembering all the horrible things that he did to her not only in the eleven chapters of this story, but also the things he put her through in the prequel, with Linda etc.
As for Abby sleeping with Alex, I liked it. heehee. Well I knew when she sat with him and he offered her a drink that they were going to sex each other up. Although the funniest thing is, when I was reading it I wasn't considering Abby and Jack's relationship, I was just thinking that Lisa was going to be pissed when she found out! haha, maybe it's because I've been in that scenario in the Lisa position before. Hmm what else...the second sex up scene took me surprise, and I think that an Alex/Abby relationship would be wayyy interesting. Pete's comment about the loud sex cracked me up, and I'm wondering if the Adam character will be reoccuring.
<3

WOW. good update. update soon please

im excited for more :)
i just read the prequel as well.
i read the whole thing last night.

Jack doesn't deserve her right now :(
I think it's good that she's kind of got her own back!
update<3

wow. update soon please :)

Oh no you didn't!!
You went there dude!
I feel bad for saying it but jack had it coming to him.
Can't wait to see what he's going to do when he finds out!
More soon my lovely Jessica:)

I say good for her jack is such a jerk

WTF!
I'm so upset with Jack right now!
How dare you make him do that!
Still love you thought my dearest Jessica:-)
Love, Tori