Ahaha! Jesssssicaaaa at first i thought you wrote the last scene and I was so proud:-P But whoever wrote it did a very good job. I'm happy you fixed them...for now;-) I have a feeling the drama is far from over. I hope your inpiration keeps coming!
I'm pretty sure I haven't had a chance to comment on this ever since you started posting the sequel and I'm really sorry! But I want to say that I absolutely love this! It's all soo real! Most of the time when I read rights in relationships is all just kinda.....awkward? Idk, it doesn't feel like a real right but this does. Abby's and Jack's relationship isn't something that's abnormal, there are plenty of people like that who would have reacted like that in a situation like that and I love that it's just so detailed. Like, I can feel how much they want this to work but don't know how to because of all the damage that's been done, whether it was self inflicted damage or just fate. But I love this sooo much and I'm glad their date went well because I really need that! Update soon please, I'm in love with this story!
Ello miss Jessica! As promised i read your lovely stories:-) The prequel...amazing! I was like freaking out everytime you threw a curve ball! But the sequel...after i got over your amazing background that I stared at for ten minutes...its amazing so far and you need to fix them asap! Even thought jack fucked up big time! Can't wait for more:-)
I just finished reading both the first story of this series/duo/whatever-you-call-it and the updates on this one, and I must say - I really like this a lot. The way you've unfolded this character and these people is just... very real to me. It's great; keep going! :)
I would have done the same thing if I were in her situtation (as stated in my last comment XD). Jack's can't seem to understand that this entire thing is his fault. He always puts the blame on her. So, he had it coming. I'm glad she's standing up for herself. But, I still love Jack and I do want them together in the end! So, I can't wait to see how this story goes! Update soon! <3
that had me on the blink of tears, i swear. i would do the exact same thing if i was her, bless her heart, Jack, really needs to get her back though. update soon pleasee(: <3 xoxoxox
Chapter 5: Oh yeah, great move, Jack! Tell Abby you love her and then when she finally stands up to you, you get pissed, drunk, and then go screw another girl. You're a real classy guy!