One World Away - Comments

ok... so I really really really hope that you will finish this story :) its so good funny I simply just love it!!!!!

Okay so I was just re reading this story and Control this Ride, and I have come to the conclusion that you DEFINITELY need to update ;P.... so yeah these stories are really awesome and I would love it if you started writing again.

Please post more I love this story so much it's soooo kool!!!!<3

I love the idea & the plot but in chapter one, it states that she's eighteen & in chapter six, it states that she's seventeen.
Just a heads up~
xxx

I love this story so much, it's one of the stories I look most forward to on this site!
Keep posting!<3<3<3

...is she supposed to be falling in love with Brian? I think she is... whoops?
This just gets better and better; more soon? Please?

this very interesting, and i can not wait to see what happens!! :D

I love it! :D

Aw she being all nerdy with Brian is so adorable! X3
And him waiting for her to come out of class is so cute, like he is her boyfriend!
I bet of Brian was alive she would date him since they have gotten to know each other so well.
The part where he flew out of the car made me laugh!
No matter how I imagine it, it'll always make me laugh! X3
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this.

I love this story. It's so great.
I love Brian in it as well. I've had the idea to do something similar to this for a while, but I've never been able to write it, so seeing a story like this is amazing. ^.^
I cannot wait for more!

xoxo

awww write more :(

haha this update made me laugh. Brian just going right though the car and not having any clue what happened. nicely done can't wait for more

I want you to update. Like now. I wish you would. Thanks:) I miss Ghostie Brian:( Bring him back some more?:)

I'm a new reader, and I have to say, I really enjoy your stories. This one has to be my favorite. I was so disappointed when I finished reading chapter 5 and then realized that I had no more chapters to read! I hope to see an e-mail for an update soon. (:
*Subscribes*

This is awesome!! I love the way she's so calm about it all, lol. Have to admit, being a curious person I'd have been like, "Ooooo!!!! Go to the library and check him out!!"
More soon? Please?

aww poor Brian =[ poisoned? Ugh. I don't like who did it!!

So, I finally got the time to read this, and I must say, it's pretty fuckin' great.
:))
I love it!
More soon?

I love the idea of Brian being a ghost!!!So...if hes never seen a video bedore does tht mean hes never seen pornO.o? Poor man. Update soon!!!:D

So I pretty much love this story. It's different...in an absolutely amazing way.