One World Away - Comments

Loved it... Can't wait for interaction between the two though. Your missed an 'a' on always and spelt highlight wrong plus another but i can't remember. I'll forgive you though.... Just this once ha =P

This is the first story on here that I've seen like this and might I add that I am totally hooked.
It seems so interesting.

I like it so far. =)

I love it so far
i cant wait for more
:)

And a popping sound can be heard.... tis of the story cherry ofcourse bahaha. LOVED IT! I love these kinds of stories and there should be more of them. I cant wait for a little bit more information, it was a great starter chapter!