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  • Myl

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    ok... so I really really really hope that you will finish this story :) its so good funny I simply just love it!!!!!
    May 25th, 2013 at 11:24am
  • rainbow.dinosaur

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    Okay so I was just re reading this story and Control this Ride, and I have come to the conclusion that you DEFINITELY need to update ;P.... so yeah these stories are really awesome and I would love it if you started writing again.
    March 6th, 2012 at 12:30am
  • MoBaLi100

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    Please post more I love this story so much it's soooo kool!!!!<3
    April 3rd, 2011 at 11:23pm
  • Azles.

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    I love the idea & the plot but in chapter one, it states that she's eighteen & in chapter six, it states that she's seventeen.
    Just a heads up~
    xxx
    March 11th, 2011 at 12:49pm
  • MoBaLi100

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    I love this story so much, it's one of the stories I look most forward to on this site!
    Keep posting!<3<3<3
    February 20th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    ...is she supposed to be falling in love with Brian? I think she is... whoops?
    This just gets better and better; more soon? Please?
    February 8th, 2011 at 09:37pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    this very interesting, and i can not wait to see what happens!! :D
    February 5th, 2011 at 08:59pm
  • amyEternal7x

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    I love it! :D
    February 5th, 2011 at 01:40am
  • hachie

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    Aw she being all nerdy with Brian is so adorable! X3
    And him waiting for her to come out of class is so cute, like he is her boyfriend!
    I bet of Brian was alive she would date him since they have gotten to know each other so well.
    The part where he flew out of the car made me laugh!
    No matter how I imagine it, it'll always make me laugh! X3
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 1st, 2011 at 03:33am
  • unholy confessions;;

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    I loved this.
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:59pm
  • Red Riding Hoodie

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    I love this story. It's so great.
    I love Brian in it as well. I've had the idea to do something similar to this for a while, but I've never been able to write it, so seeing a story like this is amazing. ^.^
    I cannot wait for more!

    xoxo
    January 31st, 2011 at 10:43pm
  • KDRL

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    awww write more :(
    January 31st, 2011 at 10:10pm
  • MamaZ

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    haha this update made me laugh. Brian just going right though the car and not having any clue what happened. nicely done can't wait for more
    January 31st, 2011 at 09:33pm
  • slumflower

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    I want you to update. Like now. I wish you would. Thanks:) I miss Ghostie Brian:( Bring him back some more?:)
    January 30th, 2011 at 08:02pm
  • synderella.

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    I'm a new reader, and I have to say, I really enjoy your stories. This one has to be my favorite. I was so disappointed when I finished reading chapter 5 and then realized that I had no more chapters to read! I hope to see an e-mail for an update soon. (:
    *Subscribes*
    January 21st, 2011 at 06:21am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    This is awesome!! I love the way she's so calm about it all, lol. Have to admit, being a curious person I'd have been like, "Ooooo!!!! Go to the library and check him out!!"
    More soon? Please?
    January 16th, 2011 at 01:01pm
  • Saoireia

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    aww poor Brian =[ poisoned? Ugh. I don't like who did it!!
    January 16th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • amyEternal7x

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    So, I finally got the time to read this, and I must say, it's pretty fuckin' great.
    :))
    I love it!
    More soon?
    January 15th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • slumflower

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    I love the idea of Brian being a ghost!!!So...if hes never seen a video bedore does tht mean hes never seen pornO.o? Poor man. Update soon!!!:D
    January 14th, 2011 at 10:28pm
  • unholy confessions;;

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    So I pretty much love this story. It's different...in an absolutely amazing way.
    January 12th, 2011 at 02:19pm
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