So glad to see an update ... to be honest I forget about mibba cause most of my favorite stories never get finished. This is my favorite most well written story. Hope you keep updating until its finished!!! Lol <3
Wow i was pleasantly surprised when i got the update email for this story! Ive been waiting years to see what happens next.. talk about a cliffhanger... hope the next update takes a lot less time lol! Great chapter one of my favorite stories :)
Daaaaaamn girl i love your story !!!! There's just something in the way you write that is just amazing ! And your story is kinda disturbing like .... Are we in Criminal Minds? Lol. But it's by far one of nicest I've read in a while. Although I can't help but hope there will be some romance .... :) Overall, it's amazing; and I can't wait to read more!
Wow I was amazed when I got an email and saw the title! I love this story! I am so excited for more chapters! It seems like she is starting fall for her kidnapper. Since Matt has been taking care of her and showing her a bit civil manner. And the ending did broke my heart a bit when she was rebuff when she showed affection to him. I look forward to the next update!
Woah, was that every good!!! Like seriously, you are a talented author with a way with words and descriptions. It's disappointing that you haven't updated the story in 4 years, there is no way you can just leave the story like that! I really want to know what happens next, does she ever escape? Does Matt continue to help her out? What is the deal with Jimmy and Jhonny? And Gates and Ver need to stay the hell away from her, they're going to end up killing her! But why did they want her in the first place? Why here of all the women in the world? I would love to see that explained. Please consider updating this soon!
All the guys are very bi-polar! Like how Brian was very gentle when he was looking at the cuts that Zacky inflicted on her when he was raping her. Then there's Jimmy was on the verge of killing, he is one weird guy but it seems that he is attached to her and wants to take care of her. And then Matt takes the liberty to clean her and he seems to know that rubbing her head calms her down. For a big muscular man, he is very gentle with her. I wonder why they choose her and are keeping her because to me it seems that they all want to take care of some in a very twisted way! I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She really got it hard by being forced to stay there. When she broke Jimmy's favorite vase and getting strangled by him if it weren't for Matt that pulled him away. Then getting beaten by Brian but she was able to give him a wound possibly a scar by biting his arm. And then Zacky comes along, cutting her back up until she was too weak to fight and he raped her. Things are not going so well for her because she was stripped of everything like she said and she just too tired and numb to do anything anymore. I wonder why they kidnapped her in first place and what they will do to her. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!