@ lovelyhope Ha. thanks for the comment. I'm sure everything will be cleared up in the next chapter and when you read it you're gonna be like - how the fuck did I miss that. :) Thanks so much!
This story is just so depressing...and I don't even know what I'm depressed about. I mean I've gathered that Chase died, Hunter and Chase were a couple, and John loves (loved?) Hunter but hates her at the same time. Besides that I'm just confused haha
@ forevernalways thank you! that means a lot! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks so much for being one of the few that are sticking with this story and commenting!! It means a lot.
I love how this hapter really showed an insight on what happened in John's past with his brother and obvious tension between his parents. I also really liked how you spoke from Jenny's perspective at some points, that was really interesting to see what she though about the way John was acting and what he seemed like to her because no one knows you better than your mother. I really enjoyed this chapter and I'm glad you're at least attempting to get back on track (that's always a start!) loved, loved loved it! Can't wait for the next update!
@ patheticmind Well that's really sweet of you. It's hard to tell when people like it or even what they think of it because you know how inconsistent comments can be. I love your stories as well. Thoughts on updating Exhale or anything... ever? lol. Actually, I shouldn't be talking I have like three stories that need updates. Thanks for the comment, excited for you to see the next chapter then.
ohh shit this story's insanely good. damn i'm at work right now supposedly going through spreadsheets...but I got totally into this story so I read it instead. Geez, I can't wait for more. I love John's character in this, and I love that the band isn't ALWAYS AROUND. well written and original, a rare find on mibba these days. one of the best, most consistent co-writes I've read thus far.
OH. MY. GOSH. i think i'm starting to put the pieces together of what's happening (rather what happened) and holy cow...if i'm anywhere close in my predictions, you guys will write one heck of a story!! (but i'm pretty sure i'm way off...) but regardless, i think this story is great and i get so excited whenever i see this story is updated!!! please update soon!!! love this!!!
so much emotion!!!! i can't wait to see how all of this unfolds!!! i have too many theories going on in my head that i can't quite sort them out enough to put into words...but please update soon!!!! love this so far!!!
@ la dispute. so glad to hear from you!!! I hope you're still writing!!! I've missed you, so thanks for finding us and reading some of the weird shit we're writing these days!!!! You're not entirely right in your prediction/guess, but I respect where you're going with it!!!
Oh, man, I've missed reading y'all's writing! I'm so in love with this story! I don't necessarily hate Hunter, but I can't say that I completely like her either. I'm sort of on the fence right now. I love the relationship between John and his mom. I know it's probably stupid to say that, but it's just so realistic and yeah ... I love it. Lol. As far as what happened with Chase goes, I have a guess, but I'm probably totally wrong: I think Hunter, in some way, was involved in an accident where he ended up dying - or maybe they were experimenting with drugs and he ended up ODing or something. I'm probably way off, but I took a guess! Hahaa. And as far as Shay goes, maybe John rejected her for Hunter. There's a lot of possibilities. Lol. Anyways, Keri & Ketely, I'm loving this and I can't wait for more! :)
Honestly I think Hunter is someone I probably wouldn't be friends with but then there's also the fact that she's been through so much, and there's ovbiously a story as to why she's the way she's is.
I think Shay's being unfair, I mean even if you don't like her you don't have to be rude. I mean I get it obviously Hunter did something to make you strongly dislike her but that doesn't mean she couldn't just be the stronger person here and let it go. I don't know, I'm just in love with this story! Update soon!