Wow have I been freakin' behind. I am so sorry! But I went back and re-read to understand everything a lot more. This was such an AMAZING story, girl, I admire it and you. You have great potential with your writing and whatnot. This was great, and I hope you go on to write more, PLEASE DO! :D <3
actually I think you did just fine with the battle scene and I'm wondering how much her abbilities has taken. Is it just her strenght or is it her life force or whatever you want to call it.. besides that I hope for more soon.. :)
....She... She drank it. 0.0 MAKE HER THROW IT UP!! D: OMG WHAT THE HELL IS GONNA HAPPEN?!?! Update soon, please! I need to know what's going to happen!!
OMFG! she drank it?! I guess that it either does what it's suppose to do or maybe her father changed the viles or made somthing else IDK. I just know that it is a frickin' good chapter and I'm lookinng forward to more. :D but I am somtimes pretty patient so no pressure from my front.