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  • CherryBlossomPetals

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    uhhhh she drank it!!!!!!! O____O!!!! please update when you can! :)
    June 27th, 2011 at 01:08am
  • nathalii47

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    xD
    June 26th, 2011 at 10:22pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    OMG OMG!!!! WHAT?!
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    June 26th, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • Lupoguardiano

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    Oh wow, two weeks. I feel bad for Jacob D: By the way, I LOVE this story! Hurry and get the next chapter up, I check your other Jacob Black story every day. Amazing chapter. :3
    June 26th, 2011 at 03:03am
  • Lachen Immer

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    Have faith Jacob!! :o
    And that's a LOOONG time...!!
    June 25th, 2011 at 08:23am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    June 21st, 2011 at 10:38pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    I love the layout!
    It is very pretty. =]
    Please update soon?
    I love your writing style. =]
    June 21st, 2011 at 06:47pm
  • CherryBlossomPetals

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    gahh two whole weeks?!! please update soon :)
    June 17th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • skinny love.

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    Well, MY GOSH!.
    Hahah girl you got me on the edge of my seat!
    The First needs to come quick so Jacob can save Allia.
    Lol, this was another great chapter, I cannot wait for more(:
    <3
    June 14th, 2011 at 06:46pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    I think that Nessie would have understood that Jake had Imprinted on Allia, because she is not an ordinary child that's a little clingy. She acts more of an adult.
    But even some adults are clingy so I guess it is accurate to some extent.
    And on that note...fantastic chapter!
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    June 14th, 2011 at 06:37am
  • snapshot22

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    I love your story!
    Your ideas are amazing!
    Keep writing!
    June 14th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • JustThinking

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    uuuhh... it's so dramatic and fillers are sometimes good for a story. they can give it a little something extra so you really "know" the people in the story and they are a good way to get all of the smaller or maybe weird ideas out. so you can get to the really good ones, or at least that's what I think.

    btw: you're wellcome :)
    this is a really good chapter and I hope for more soon. :D
    June 13th, 2011 at 09:33pm
  • nathalii47

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    love the update!!
    xD
    June 13th, 2011 at 12:02pm
  • CherryBlossomPetals

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    yes yes yes! go get her Jacob!!
    June 13th, 2011 at 12:52am
  • JustThinking

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    dramatic changes, I wonder where they will lead and if the voulterri will keep their promisses.
    Update soon please.

    congrats on last day of high school and good luck with college! :D
    June 12th, 2011 at 09:49pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Awesome update. :)
    I graduated in May, but yea. Just the thought of going into college is scary.
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    June 12th, 2011 at 05:54am
  • Lachen Immer

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    ...Well, it's about damn time Jake finally grows a brain!! xD
    The detail in this chapter was good. I really liked how you wrote about the final cable snapping away. I could totally hear it in my noggin!!
    And... I'm gonna go out on a limb and pray that her dad isn't going to betray her in the end. :/
    Please update soon! :D
    June 10th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • SHYLA01

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    This is really good, I stayed up to read all of it... it's now 2:20am -_-' FML. But it's worth it.
    June 9th, 2011 at 08:20pm
  • nathalii47

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    :D
    June 9th, 2011 at 06:29pm
  • LoveIsAGameCanYouWin

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    Sorry but her dad just doesnt seem right, but who knows, maybe he's telling the truth? And awww poor jake! Though he deserves it!! Cant wait for more, love the story.
    June 9th, 2011 at 03:34pm
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