Too Good to Be True - Comments

P.S. Major squishies.

P.S. Major squishies.

OMFG! Just re-read this and I was listening to Round Here by Counting Crows and I'm crying and just... BWAHHH!!!
I forgot how much I love this story and I just... It's amazing. It's incredible. And I wish this was real... to a point(I don't want you to be an abused kid or have your brother taken away from you or for you to jump off the brooklyn bridge or anything like that).
I love you. I love your story. I love you for writing this story. Thank you.

She's going to wake up with amnesia isn't she?

Anyway, I'm talking to you as I was reading this and it's amazing <3 It was just like reading it all over again for the first time ^-^ I got squishies, I got excited, I did the retarded clap things xD I just... I fell in love all over again. Thank you for writing a wonderful story and thank you for incorporating me into it :)
Love you Shazzy ^-^

Crying.........still crying...... Dear lord omfg you are amazing girl. *wipes tear*. STILL CRYING.... Please say there's s sequel where she lives!!!!! D'= still god damn weeping!?!? VampirePanda formerly miss.L.W.Revenge sorry I didnt comment for ages I just caught back up :) xxxxxx

Please oh please tell me that there is more? A sequel or something?? You might've said it at the end of the last chapter, and I just missed it cause I did read it...I'm such a nerd... :p But I truly loved your story!! Sometimes, honestly, when it says fanfic I may not read it just because there's so much on here and I start to get sick of it, but I'm glad I clicked on yours! You introduced the members of MCR as actual characters and kept the plot fresh & realistic. The main character was seriously tortured, and you made her almost into a superhero by the way she was able to bounce back and still be happy, but the end? Such a twist, was NOT expecting that. Awesome!!!

i think she should have lived

Woah. Well then. Hmm. :( Anyway, this story was wonderful to read, and thank you.

P.s. STOP CRYING!

P.P.S. Wooo - Page cherry! ^_^

I.am.in.pieces.

I actually had to slap myself to breathe because I couldn't believe she jumped...like, I kept re-reading the last few lines as if hoping for it to be a different outcome. You literally took.my.breath.away.

..and that my dear, is why I love you. This story has pretty much fueled my year, my creativity, my life decisions in terms of music and art and writing, and myself. Without having this story to read, I'd be still stuck in nowhere...I don't think I'll ever get to thank you enough for that. *Stop crying if you've started btw...'cause I have more to say and you can't read properly when you have swimming pools cascading from your eyeballs!!!*

Without you, I wouldn't have been introduced to Lozza or Lena - and it's incredible to trace your story back to Lozza's TBLHABM...without her inspiring you, you wouldn't have inspired me. It's funny how things work out like that :D

This story has been incredible. I've followed the highs and the lows - the proms, the concerts and the horrifying times of abuse and rape - and it's been one hell of a story. You are an incredibly talented person, a beautiful soul inside and out, and someone I am more than proud to call a close friend. Remember this - because I mean every.single.word.

This story coming to an end is bitter-sweet...I don't know what to do without an update to read; but I'm incredibly proud to have gone on the journey and been privileged to read this. Shazzybee - you are amazing...as an author and as a person.

Basically this comment boils down to this: I loved loved loved loved loved this story...and I love you.

xx <3 <3

Okay. I am SO glad that Jo turned out to be.. Like, kinda awesome! I wouldn't have been able to stand it otherwise. So that's all good.

Now, about this latest chapter......
NO!!!!!!!
just NO FUCKING WAY. STOP IT. HAILEY THIS IS NOT OKAY. URG ANEUAMHEKEBSUEJDJS!!
I was almost shouting at my computer (plus att the 'Lena Character' to just jump you and pin you to the floor, not letting you go anywhere near that bridge) because it makes me so sad that Hailey's sad. I mean, I love Hailey. We all do. We need her, Tommy needs her... Frank needs her. (btw. FRANK - GET YOUR ASS OVER THERE [HERE] AND LIKE...... KISS HAILEY BACK TO THE RIGHT SENSE OF MIND! I don't even know if that's like a correct saying or whatever but you get it)
So now I guess I just have like three tiny little thing to say:

1. Don't let her do it.

2. Don't let her do it.

3 oh and what's the third.... How about this: Don't let her do it.

Hahaha, I was like dbdiufhfkrdolddnfi (=freaking out, being weird, screaming) in this comment. Sorry about that. I love you Shazzy, have a great time in Aberdeen! :D and update soon again (or wait... That'll be the last chappie huh? Ohnoes. *sadface*)

Oh my god!! haha. I read the last line of the newest update and the first thing that came to my mind was that she was thinking about jumping off the Brooklyn bridge, just like the other heartbroken people! I literally groaned when the chapter was over because i wanted to read more!! haha. Well i hope you update, like SOON (:

Ok, so I read the little chapter teaser under the chapter number and thought 'oh crap, this is going to suck. Tommy's going to have an awful time and my heart is about to be ripped out.'

...then I read it, and once more I am legitimately in tears. Like, when I cry properly my nose goes spastic with snot (niiice mental image for you there dear) so I'm currently a sniffling wreck as I type this.

Plus side: Jo seems like she's going to be amazing for Tommy - and she said they'd come back to visit/Hailey could go there so it's all going to be great. I wish Tommy could stay with Hailey - but sometimes, these things happen for a reason. And that phone call with Frank - oh, he must hurt so badly for her right now :[

I cannot wait for the next update, things are A LOT safer here tonight after the communities banded together to help the police after last night's tragic loss of three lives - and I think the rioting will die down, if only for tonight. I hope you have an AMAZING time in Aberdeen, and I shall talk to you sooooooooooon lovely lady!!! xxx <3 <3

YOU ARE TEASING ME! I NEED MORE UPDATES!! I NEED TO KNOW WHAT´LL HAPPEN NEXT!!!!!! LOVE YOU! XX

I finally got caught up and your story is amazing!!! You better update on time!!!

And by sequel..that's me hinting to you to FUCKING WRITE ONE OR I'LL CRY MORE!!!

*Hopes you listen and don't want me to cryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy*

I'm crying. I'm actually full-blown crying.

I really don't want Tommy to be taken away :( But I trust you as an author implicitly; and know that there is a plan behind everything, whether it be in TGTBT or the sequel.

You never fail to amaze me. <3

DONT THEY DARE TO TAKE TOMMY AWAY! SERIOUSLY! -.-
I love this update and I cant wait for MORE! I cant FUCKING WAIT for the rest of it all!! I LOVE YO U<3

This definitely brought tears to my eyes!
Great chapter!

D: Get updating again.... SOON!! You cant leave it at that! DX
xx