just found this story and i like it! woohoo Frank likes her. btw the font color is slightly hurting my eyes. IMHO, it would be better if it's in black, but it's just my opinion though. it doesn't bother me that much :) anyways, cant wait to read some more! xx
Okay, this is reallyreallyreally great! I love Hailey's attitude, it reminds me of me! Please keep it coming, I wanna see what happens with Gerard! That's my man right there!
Where the hell is the rest of this! You can't just leave me hanging like that I mean come on. I wanna know what happens next...grr hurry up Monday!
If you don't know by now I FREAKING LOVE THIS! You had ME nervous when Kim opened the door, and I couldn't help but smile when Hailey hugged Ray and touched his fro and then got to hug her dream man Frankie. Now Gerard is my dream man but I am so waiting to see her go in the closet with (hopefully) Frankie, to be honest I'll prolly skip over Gerard's closet thing...what can I say I'd get jealous, story of not. I love you and this story (not in a stalkerish way (eep I said his last name!) though) lol
UP-FREAKING-DATE!
Oh, also don't forget to enter when someone says something and then again when there's a new paraghraph, capitolize too. (I don't always remember but I try)