Manhattan - Comments, page 7

andrew luck. (100)

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Apart from a few grammar mistakes, the story is awesome.
Continue updating please :)

December 23rd, 2010 at 11:54pm

bale dekker. (100)

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re-write? why yes, yes yes. update!

December 23rd, 2010 at 09:51pm

RosiePosie08 (100)

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Love the update honey

December 23rd, 2010 at 08:26pm

noe knows. (100)

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Yay! I loved the re-write, please continued this!

December 23rd, 2010 at 06:42pm

Staaler (100)

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This story is gunna be awesome, I can just tell :D Can't wait for the next update.

December 23rd, 2010 at 02:33pm

viva la roy; (100)

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Oh, man. I love the re-write. If I must say so, it is better than the first chapter you had previously written. Your really talented. Continue you on guh.

December 23rd, 2010 at 10:10am