I don't know how you do it but each chapter seems to be better than the previous. This story just keeps getting better and better. I'm not even gonna lie, this is probably one of the best, if not the best, story I've read on here.
I love the dynamic between the two of them. I find myself cracking up a lot as I read this. I really enjoy Jenner as a character.
I also really love how you mix seriousness with humor, so that things don't get to heavy between the two. You're a great writer, and I'm really loving this story!
The tension between them is unreal - but it is more than that. They are starting to relate to each other on a much deeper level. They are starting to reveal more of who they are - bit by bit.
So that when the sexual tension does finally break, it will not just be a physical release - it will be an emotional connection.