The song is beautiful. I wish I could actually hear it sung. I loved it. Alex might be making it difficult for Adi to move on but he does need to get his own feelings out and music is obviously how he does it so she should understand a little bit more. The fight scene between Adi and Roxxie was really believable. I feel bad for both the girls but I think they needed to yell and hit each other as part of the healing process. That's what I do with my friends. But now both girls' secrets are out as far as who they have feelings for and shit is definitely gonna hit the fan. Matt must be all like, "What the fuck? She likes me, WHAT?" haha, hopefully something happens there because if it doesn't, let's just say it won't be pretty for you two (; And I'm honestly worried about Zack. It's a bit obvious that Alex and Adi belong together and he's just gonna get crushed if they act on those leftover feelings.
And now I just think about Jack and how bad this must hurt him. He should probably just get his feelings out and tell about how him and Rox aren't really dating and just start to move on. I feel so bad for him. Ugh, I wanna cry when I think about it :(
Can I just remind you both how much I love this story and how great you both are as writers? Okay good because I love this story and you guys write really well. I especially liked the ending of this chapter, it was very strong and meaningful.
Blah, I always get like, post update depression and try to count down the hours until next Saturday.
That song was amazing <3 God. I dont think its possible for me to melt anymore than i did in this chapter. Zack is such a sweetheart xD It was a long time coming, Roxxie and Adi's fight.. I just hope that they can sort everything out soon :/
I actually cried. Alex, the poor baby, is so upset and it just kills me that Jack is just out in the cold. Seriously, when Jack was like, best friends forever, my heart just dropped. He's so sad. Another person I feel sorry for is Zack. I hope he doesn't get completely crushed or anything. Addison really shouldn't have said yes because it is his heart on the line as well as hers.
To Roxxie and Jack's fake relationship, apparently it's going well. I feel like eventually she's gonna break and tell Matt or someone else it's not real. Then shit's just going to hit the damn fan at a magnitude so great that it will cover the world. Haha, but for real, she isn't gonna be able to keep the secret for much longer I don't believe, especially since she's seperated from her family like that. That must really suck.
And as far as Harry Potter movies go, well, PoA and OotP are tied as my favorite movies. Which must mean that I can draw a parallel between Roxxie and I, which means that when I get older I'll be in a famous band, be super awesome, surrounded by amazing dudes all the time, and have boy problems that aren't gross because said boys are amazing. Haha, oh god, my life is so weird.
I love that this was a day early, even though I'm reading it on Saturday anyway, and it just makes my life to read this story. Legit, is it Saturday again yet? Hm. I wish I was as good with updating as you two are. You're my inspiration for updating weekly. Anyway, I love you both and hope that next Saturday comes quickly so that I can just revel in the happiness that is IFMO and all the massive shitloads of problems that all these people have.
I am dead. I am dying. I am dead on the floor. I am writing this from beyond the grave. Can I have Zack? Can I please? His little speech in the middle literally made my heart swell up with joy. When he said, "I can make you happy Adi." Oh my actual GOD I almost cried in happiness. This is so cute and adorable and I just want to throw up rainbows and unicorns. Holy shit, I am just giggling and blushing all over the place. Zack and Adi sittin' in a tree, hahahahaa!
And I'm also happy that her and Rian made up, of course and that she's going to forgive Roxxie. But, oh, awwwww! This made my weekend <3
OH MY FUCKING GOD. OH MY GOD. WHY IS THIS STORY SO AMAZING? Okay, so I just have to tell you that I just rolled around moaning on the floor of my living room about how bad I feel for Matt and how I just wanna hug him and love him and make him feel better while my little brother watched me as though I was crazy (which I am).
This whole story, the plot and the characters and the dialogue, is just fanfuckingtastic. You're such a good cowrite pair, for real. My word, when Matt picked her up and took care of her I almost died on the floor. Its nice to see Alex and Roxxie together and everything and especially Adi moving on a little from Alex. Oh lord, this story. Why don't you have pages and pages of comments? You should. You really should. I am whoring this story out everywhere, I hope you don't mind. Everywhere. You should update soon before I go through withdrawals or something.
Not even kidding. You have no idea how many times i died in that chapter when i read about Zack taking off his shirt :o ;] But it is seriously sweet the way that Zack was asking permission from Roxxie, in a way i would have thought that it would be Rian he would ask for permission but its a nice change :) Omg poor Matt, my heart went out to him, he seemed like a little puppy that had just been kicked or something :/
OH MY GOD! That is beyond fucking cute that Zack asked Roxxie for permission. Holy shit, I just want to hug him for the rest of my life. Adi better say yes even though Alex will be all depressed and she's so confused. But Zack would be upset if she says no. It's really an awkward situation. I feel sooooo bad for Matt. The whole Jack and Roxxie thing must be crushing him. I hope everything gets worked out between them. It seems like Jack is accidentally ruining everything for everyone. I kinda feel bad for him and his fucked up ways.