The Little Things Give You Away - Comments

  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Rileys mum kinda tried to rape him!!
    Thaats well sick!!
    She should go to a rehab thing to learn how to control herself!!
    Update soon please :)
    January 22nd, 2011 at 07:24pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    SHE'S FUCKING DEMENTED.
    January 22nd, 2011 at 05:34pm
  • Moosey

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    Hehehe; hish mama ish hiiiiiiiigh
    Hehehe, Josh falling over on the island of hopes and dreams XD
    Moar soon plz :3
    January 21st, 2011 at 05:35pm
  • Sostarstruck

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    Honestly I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this anymore, since I think Riley is being.. Well, weak. And because he obviously won't fight this. But I will, just because I'm very curious to see the outcome of this!

    You're a good writer by the way :)
    January 19th, 2011 at 02:49pm
  • words as weapons

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    I love it!!!!!! thats so sick but i really enjoyed the way you wrote it. keep writing can't wait for the next chapter
    January 17th, 2011 at 01:10am
  • reemmeeyy

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    thats suppeerrr awkward :/ rileys mum is such a freak
    January 15th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • SkittlesRus

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    holy shittt! You HAVE to update .! <3
    January 14th, 2011 at 06:47am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    O.o
    What a ho-bag. >.>
    HER SON'S BEST FRIEND!?
    GAHD.
    Poor Ry.
    He needs to go back to his dad's. >.>
    January 13th, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • kissmyoops

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    Day-um. This is an intense story you got deary.
    I love how when you switch POV's you keep up with the character's personalities.
    A lot of people make their characters similar when they do that.
    You're are unique.
    LOVE IT(:
    January 13th, 2011 at 09:30pm
  • Moosey

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    Hehe, you knew I would figure it out ;)
    Nice (if not a bit rape-ish) update :)
    Oh so you've nearly got them all done?
    Will there be any parts that I reeeeaaaaaalllllllllly like in there? ... please?
    XD
    Moar soon plz :3
    January 8th, 2011 at 10:46pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    OMG!!
    His mum is sooo sick!!
    He should like leave or something??
    Update soon :)
    January 8th, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    D;
    That's fucking sick.
    Poor Riley
    :(
    -hugs-
    January 8th, 2011 at 04:55pm
  • Moosey

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    Really?! Yaaaay! They deserved it!
    And good update, but you said running so much that I started to feel smellyful...I have no idea what that's about :L
    Moar soon plz :3
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:04pm
  • XxATLxMCRxX

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    his mom sells him for sex!! OMFG! just a prediction but i think im right...... i love it :)
    January 7th, 2011 at 04:55am
  • nicholas joseph;

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    :x
    January 6th, 2011 at 09:08pm
  • Moosey

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    Sorry I took so long to read and comment on this hunnie bunny :(
    But I know what's gonna happennnnnnnnnnnnnnn ;PPPPPPPP
    SHE HIRED A MEAN UNICORN TO COME AND POKE HIM ROUGHLY IN THE ARM!!!! D:<
    Hehehe
    But I have to say I'm dissappointed
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    I mean how could you?
    Did you not even think of me while doing this, does nothing I told you even seem to matter?!?
    *starts sobbing*WHY?!?!?!?!?
    How could you?
    Why?
    Why would you dare to call a paedophile Chuck?
    You know how much Chuck means to me! He's gonna come and roundhouse kick you in da faaaaaaaaace D:<
    ...
    ...
    :P
    Moar soon plz :3
    January 5th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    OMG!!!!
    I do have a bit of ideas what is gonna happen but it will probably sound really stupid!
    Updates soon please :)
    January 5th, 2011 at 07:37pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    :O
    SHE PICKED SOMEONE FOR HIM!?
    WHAT THE HELL IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN!?
    January 4th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • nicholas joseph;

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    I LIKE.
    -duh-
    x]

    Ewww.
    Riley's mum is grossing me out. XD
    January 3rd, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • x.MrsAlexGaskarth.x

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    Yay!!! Updates!! (:
    I dunno but I'm starting to think that Matt might be a tiny little but not very nice I dunno but I thought he was gonna ouch someone or something
    Awwwwwwwww nooo you can't have slow updates I really like this story!!
    Hoping for updates soon even if we are back at school ):
    January 3rd, 2011 at 06:31pm