June 4th, 2011 at 02:58am
You have created a beautiful layout for your story. I love how the colors work together with the art. I didn't find any mis-spellings and you are a very talented writer if I do say so myself. You have a talent that you should keep working at- I'm sure it will pay off in the end. Keep up the good work!!!!
xoxox
Samantha
Its' a kidnap story? Cool. I like how light and nice you made the prologue like, then included the darkness into the rest of the chapters. And there's no sex - a usual occurence for captive stories. So kudos for that.
This was a great read sweets, :)