Oh wow this is good. I really feel like I know the main character well. Great sense of imagery and wording matched well with the story. There is a sense of suspense and it's quite interesting. I wasn't expecting the kidnapping, it's so unpredictable and that's what gives it its charm. I like the layout and banner also, well done. This is a very good story.
February 6th, 2011 at 01:44am