Am I Still Your Charm? Or Am I Just Bad Luck? - Comments

Oh, well, I'm pretty sure this is all going to end well... lol.

Brian, like normal, needs his ass kicked. I mean, what the fuck? He's obviously not moved on if he's upset that she 'slept' with Zacky. Best friend or not, if he had moved on, which he should have by now, he really wouldn't have cared as long as Zacky was happy. I can wait to see what happens when he goes to stay with her because of it. XD

I think that she may have really fucked up with the Zacky thing. Maybe it will lead to something good but I don't think that it will. Just another array of problems. lol.

And Brian needs a kick in the ass. He's like a big baby... Ugh. XD

The silence was deafening. I had had this moment with so many of my past guy friends, I knew it well. It was the moment you were with a guy, and both of you realize at the same time that the other is a member of the opposite sex. Well, it's mainly the guy who realizes, the girl usually already knows.

Sadly, I know this feeling too well. It's happened with almost all of my guy friends and then we end up drifting apart because I'm a major chicken shit lol. It's one of the worst awkward moments ever haha.

While I'd never admit it to Brian, his family was always so nice. I never understood how they had gotten such an asshole for a son.

I laughed; I just thought I should share my laughter with you.

While you may be a terrible person with the whole updating thing, lol, your updates are very worth it. I will now take this time to say that since I joined Mibba and began reading your stories about, I dunno, wouldn't it be almost 2 or 3 years now? Anyway, from then until now I can see how your writing has changed, grown, an improved lol. So *nostalgic, dramatic clapping*

I really like Zacky in this. He's like, an introverted cocky bastard, but he doesn't flaunt it in the ways that Brian does, plus he's much kinder lol.

MORE SOON! Again...SOON!

I feel like an ass because I had forgotten you'd told me you'd changed the title, so when it came up in my reminders I was like what is this? Good thing I looked. I've now caught up.

I just love how Brian jumped to conclusions about Andi and the baby. I understand he's pissed cuz he knew when she she left town that she was pregnant, but still, give her a chance to explain. Douche.

The get together at Matt's cracked me up. I love that Jimmy fucked Brian up. I was laughing so hard when he to Andi that Jimmy had busted his ass. He deserves another punch for taking her whiskey.

I love this fucking story and can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon? Promise I won't get lost again. :)

Great story!!can't wait for more!!!:)

haha Brian is such a ass
he deserved the beating Jimmy gave him lol

hmm Zacky and Andi...I would actually like to see that lol
I <3 ZV =)

I really like Andi's character
she so cool and laid back =)

awesome update! =)

Sharing is not caring! It's just something stupid that stupid people say when they didn't bring their own! lol. I'm glad Jimmy kicked his ass. He's need more of the ass kickage... I'm just sayin'.

As you know, I truly enjoy Zacky in this. He's cocky, but a very muted kind of cocky, if that makes sense. Maybe I am reading too much into it, but I see possibilities of that going somewhere, at least as a fling sort of thing.

And good for Jimmy for kicking Brian's ass lol. He deserved it, especially when he said it was still her fault. Ugh, he deserves it lol.

More ASAP! <3

Thanks or the update.. I LOVE this story so much!!!!!

Fucking beautiful just fucking beautiful. Love the story...cant wait to read more

Great story Plz write more!!!!:)

"Because, it would be rather difficult to tell people I'm back with his jaw wired shut." I smirked. That woud be my favorite line. You know why. lol.

Brian is a douche. I mean, I can understand why he would think that but he came there for answers but never let her give any.

I'm... excited to see what happens. XD

While Brian's anger was kinda sexy lol
he was a rude asshole for snapping at
Andrea and not letting her explain what happened
I hope he actually listens to her at the party...
...i wonder what his reaction will be...

and i loved the trip down memory lane =)
my favorite pic for some reason was the one
Brian took of her and put in the jacket =)

awesome update! =)

"I wondered briefly if I could sell it on eBay. Probably."
That was my favorite line, if only because it made me roll around in my seat giggling for a bit XD.

Brian is an ass for jumping to conclusions like that, but then again it's an easy conclusion to jump to. Plus, he seems like he could be a bit of a hot-headed person, so I see it as fitting that he would overreact in such a manner. I mean, he would have to have a bit of a temper to get along with Andi, since she has a temper, too.

I thought the little insights into Jimmy and Larissa were nice too, even putting obvious reasons aside. I think you got her character down really well just from Andi's descriptions of her, and it would make sense that her and Jimmy would somehow manage to balance each other out.

More as soon as you can; I really love this story my dear Hellion <3 I shall even whore it out.

He was laying down, propped up my my black silk pillow, staring back at me with his coffee colored eyes. His dark hair was illuminated by the flickering fire's light. He was gorgeous, and he knew it. But he didn't belong there, on my bed. I wasn't even sure he belonged in my life.

I just loved that description. It was so...vivid in my mind I guess. It was a lovely image, too lol.

Leave it to Jimmy to push things <3 haha, and it makes me smile stupidly that Larissa is married to him.

I loved it, now off to read and comment on the next chapter, since I'm such a terrible slacker.

I thought this chapter was great.. Thanks for the update..

WOW WOW WOW.... Are you still updating this? I would love to read more..

I love this story already!

Loved the second chapter
way to be originial and have her lose the baby.
That made me sad, I wanted a baby
but you are a wonderful writer and I have faith that this will be an amazing story
so can't wait to see what happens next.

Omg, this is so great. I love how well written it is and not confusing. I loves it and can't wait for more!!! Take your time and don't rush to update so it'll be just as good! LOL