Am I Still Your Charm? Or Am I Just Bad Luck? - Comments

  • I was wondering at the beginning of the second chapter where her baby was but the more I read, I finally realized that she lost the baby.
    So she was only three months pregnant when she lost the baby?
    She must have been really depress because I know she was looking forward to raising her baby but lost it due to some complications.
    Man so she has been away from home for almost ten years?
    Wow no wonder she didn't recognize Jimmy right away.
    I can also tell that she is blaming herself because she hasn't settle down, she just buried herself into her work.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 10th, 2011 at 07:08pm
  • Wow. Well, it seems like her life picked up. I mean, that's good, right? But the whole thing about Brian needing closure is a bit one sided to think about. She obviously needs closure, too. The loss of the baby was harder on her than anyone else which is understandable. But I think that it's more than that. If she is still so effected by just seeing Jimmy then that means she is still, deep down, effected by Brian and misses him and the ‘what ifs’ are probably plaguing her as well. The fact that she has been running from her past with as much determination as she seems to have is only more proof of it all.

    And okay, you can bribe, I can threaten. It’s all good. Lol. Update… XD
    January 10th, 2011 at 04:19pm
  • Oh this is going to get interesting. I'm excited! Can't wait for the next chapter! <3
    January 10th, 2011 at 02:34pm
  • I just found this story and I love it already... I can't wait for more and I could so picture Jimmy doing something like that. Walking around like he owns the place. Lol I ready can't wait for more..... great job!!!!
    January 10th, 2011 at 01:27pm
  • aww i cant believe she lost the baby =(

    she should really tell Brian
    maybe things wont be so bad...

    and how can you knot love jimmy =) lol

    awesome update! =)
    January 10th, 2011 at 07:24am
  • Thi is so fucing amazing!
    i love it! =)
    January 9th, 2011 at 06:10pm
  • It did look familiar, my dearest demon. I just sat here reading it thinking I lost my mind. Well done on that though making me feel crazy isn't all that hard after all. Who we are and all. lol.

    Update soon. On this or anything else, really. I know squeezing an update from you is harder than an old man who has taken a whole bottle of Viagra while surfing the porn sites but remember, I got sporks... Just sayin'. XD

    I wanna know what’s going to happen. Sounds very promising.
    January 8th, 2011 at 01:20pm
  • OMG I love the beginning!!!!
    So she left him because she is pregnant with his child?
    And she didn't want to hold him back from his dreams?
    Man I look forward to the next update and hope it'll be soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    January 8th, 2011 at 03:04am
  • I'm really glad you decided to move along with this. I was so excited when you left me that comment! Can't wait to see what's in store. :)
    January 6th, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • Why the HELL didn't she tell him about the baby?
    ugh, I admit that it was well written but I hate when people get sad...
    so I feel bad for Brian
    Can't wait to see what happens next

    -PLKAF
    January 6th, 2011 at 02:14pm
  • i love it already!
    But god darn i feel so bad for brian :*(
    Update soon !
    January 6th, 2011 at 01:28pm