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  • sunpoison

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    Damn i hope its soon
    September 9th, 2012 at 03:00pm
  • avenmaide

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    Nope ;) Not here. Not yet. Maybe later!
    September 6th, 2012 at 04:16am
  • sunpoison

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    HEY YOU WRITING MORE lol
    August 31st, 2012 at 04:46pm
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    The amount of dialogue here really satisfied my eye needs, if that makes sense xD You actually put the time to separate your sentences into smaller, readable paragraphs. I commend you for that :D

    To be honest, I'm here for the Mibba Comment Swap (just so you wouldn't be wondering why you received a random comment all of a sudden).

    Your character seems a little quirky and VERY 3D, unlike some who don't seem at all that realistic. Your style of writing is one to die for; simple but somehow manages to capture every essence of what's needed to be known about the scene. In other words, amazing job!
    June 11th, 2012 at 02:51am
  • avenmaide

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    Hahahahaha you already read what I posted? Wow, you're good! Which makes me feel awful because I haven't checked on your story in a while.
    May 30th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • sunpoison

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    MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 29th, 2012 at 03:16pm
  • avenmaide

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    Haha! FINALLY!
    March 13th, 2012 at 02:20am
  • sunpoison

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    yeah i know it is lol
    March 1st, 2012 at 05:14pm
  • avenmaide

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    Hehehehe it's taken me forever, literally
    December 25th, 2011 at 05:52am
  • sunpoison

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    I know lol
    December 24th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • avenmaide

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    Yeah :) Finally, right?
    December 18th, 2011 at 03:59am
  • sunpoison

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    And now im alive again lol. And back on earth..... ;) lol jk, its ur story
    December 17th, 2011 at 10:54pm
  • avenmaide

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    Hahah NOW it's been months :)
    October 12th, 2011 at 04:35am
  • sunpoison

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    Sure lena lol
    October 3rd, 2011 at 01:59am
  • avenmaide

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    Nope. Hasn't been for months. I'm getting on it, Allie. :D
    September 21st, 2011 at 11:06pm
  • sunpoison

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    Right. There's nothing new :(
    September 14th, 2011 at 10:45pm
  • avenmaide

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    And yet sometimes so different. Eh, that's what best friends are supposed to be, right? :)
    August 22nd, 2011 at 05:39pm
  • sunpoison

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    Yes we are. Haha
    August 21st, 2011 at 09:48pm
  • avenmaide

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    Gah ignore the posted twice thing. I thought it didn't post at first.:P
    August 8th, 2011 at 09:03pm
  • avenmaide

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    Yeah, I have to do the same thing too. Haha, we're so similar.
    August 8th, 2011 at 09:03pm
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