Operation Beautiful - Comments

I actually really like Emmaleigh.. I don't know about Jessica yet. Maybe I'll warm up to her?

So, I read the first chapter. And then I realized that it was a sequel. Woops.

I like the plot of this story so far. It seems like it'll be really cute and romantic and fun. But I feel like the writing is a bit all over the place. Especially the last big part about the sleepover. It just seemed a little random and I felt like it was totally different from the first half with the notes.

Also, the tenses switched between past and present often throughout the first chapter.

I'm interested to see how mystery girl places that sticky. I'm also excited to find out who she is later in the story, though I have my guesses. =)

Haha. We already have people rooting for Emmaleigh? I think my mysterious suspense skills are freakishly sorely lacking *facepalm*

You know what, maybe someone else will be Corey's princess charming. Have you ever thought of that? Hmmm? On the brightside, no one's picked up on a little somethin somethin I got brewin in the oven. *cue entrance of reader11... to change that* whatever happened to her, anyway? I miss you! Just like I would miss Snow and Ballerina if they hadn't shown their faces down here.

I love it!!! And I think emmaliegh is the new Haley. And I'm glad that she didn't dissapper. I can't wait to see what happens with all of them :D

haha awww i like seeing Haley changing and going back to normal. progress, progress, progress :) haha I really like Corey's perspective it's soo cool! this post-it-game is really keeping me on edge! it's soo mysterious.. o.O! i dig it!! all the guys are soo supportive of Haley which is sooo nice :)
Update soon!! :D

I like that Haley keeps popping up because I really love her character. I like that her and Corey are still friends. :D And that game that Corey's playing is cute. Keep up the amazingness!

haha. I just updated, lol.

well looking into the future, with my super inhuman psychic powers i think Corey like Emmaleigh and they might possible get together *wink wink* yay!!! so cute!! i love how loopy they are at like 3 in the morning reminds me of my friends and i when it's super late! haha I hope you get extra more readers and comments with this new story!! Update soon! Keep it up! :D

I realllyyyy like this story. I would love to see Emmaleigh and Corey date. haha They seem like they're in the awkward into each other stage. Ahh, I don't know. Just thought I should let you know that you're one of the few people on my subscriptions that updates regularly! Keep it up

OOOOO AWESOME!!!
Very less trippy indeed!!!!
hahaha I loved the update : )
I have to agree with Artemis33 there could be some foreshadowing there : ) And I would love to see that happen!!!
I would write more seeing as my comments are usually long, but it is almost 3 in the morning for me, But I just happened to log on and see that you updated and HAD to read and comment!!
Cant wait for the next update!!!

I knew they would apologize some how :) Anyone who hasn't read "It started with a bet..." I strongly suggest you do :D

I love this story! Your a great writer too. : )
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I love how Corey is always embarrassing himself in front of Emmaleigh. I'd say it foreshadows at something. *hint, hint* LOVE THIS STORY :D

Can't wait to read more :)

I like it, but i'm sure with another chapter, i'll love it.

I'm sure that girl's self-esteem skyrocketed after that. i'd be so embarrassed if i were her and if i were the sister i'd smack them for doing that. funny, but mean.

I LOVE IT. I can't wait for the next update. =)

Aw, it's Corey's POV! Wow...nothing feels better than having to guys argue about not kissing you.

I really like this so far! Aww. Poor girl, guys are so insensitive sometimes.

I'm really, really liking this story!! I promise to leave a comment with more depth lTer, I'm just about to rush out the door!