He Calls Me Sweetheart - Comments

moreeeeeeee ):

I LOVE this story soooooooooo much and Eli and the little flashbacks are inserted so wonderfully and beautifully and everything flows. The Strangers really was a scary ass movie o_o

First off-- I ADORE Oliver. He cracks. Me. Up. Something hysterical. XD second off, do I know you lol. I have a character named Eli, he's 15, and has an abusive past about the same. Except he has a girlfriend. XD I made her come back to life, and now I can't kill her off again. I read the summary and went "What the.." Lol, this is an amazing story. Looking forward to an update. =D

:O You can't just cut it off!
DAMN CLIFFHANGERS?!
:D You should definitely KEEP this! :D
<3!

Actually, we were hardly cumbersome with each other at all.
this sentence doesn't make sense
partly because cumbersome is an adjective
and it's being used as a verb here :]

D': Sad-face! And that's not over the lack of smut!(I'm actually fine with that being...well not being really. Twasn't the right time. *nods* yep. Not that I'm awkward at a~ll) I am sad because poor Eli has such a sad past! D': I hope he gets better in the mental department and doesn't struggle too much with relationships....

Okay, I'm going to stop asking questions and just praise you to the high heavens now 'coz you keep on answering them! Wow....OwO Loving this! *happy sigh* Moving onward then~! *w*

The way you describe is so awesome! "He had a peek-a-boo thing going on" Sorry, that made me inside smile. It's almost exactly how my friends and I talk. Oh, I'm going to assume that this takes place in America but please correct me if I'm wrong. Just for the accent reference as being British (well Scottish....don't get me started XD) I just think instantly in a British accent so I have to make Emily's voice EXCEPTIONALLY British to compare. That's another thing, what type of British? You don;t have to be too specific as you kind of put the accent in but differentiations between a Scottish, Welsh, Irish and English accent would be nice as they are incredibly different. Of course, I've already kind of assumed it's an English one but not one of those really posh ones. One like my auntie has...which I unfortunately can't explain. D: Which isn;t much help at all really. Well, nonetheless twas awesome and I'm off to read more, toodaloo!

Keep! Yay, I'm so glad I foundth this! I have not read a good slash story in ages! :'D This one look well developed right from the off. One with more to it than just a little bit o' romance for the masses and I like that. I'm off to read more and I hope it's all as good as what little I've read!

I like this story. :3 You should most definitely keep it. ;)

aww a heart felt chapter...lol..I liked it....makes me wanna know everything about his past...cant wait for an update ! <3

I like this. I like this quite a bit. ^_^

Fuking amazing!! I love this! Please update again soon, im dying to know whats going to happen next!

i like this, and i like where its going...hope you update soon

Oh snap, drama rama.

keep it! keep it! keep it!!! i cant wait to see what happens next!

Awesome FUCKING posseum! I really like this, please update again soon?

This is so cute and I'm really glad that you haven't incorporated any smut into it yet. I think that would be taking everything a bit too fast. I love the way you put parts of Eli's past throughout the fourth chapter, it really gives a bit more detail about everything. I can't wait to see where you take this and I'm anxious for you to update. Good job, love. <3

OMG!!!! :o I might die if you don't update soon!!!! SO HURRY UP!!! O_O -subscribes-

LET THE SMUT GAMES BEGIN!!