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  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    this chapter was by far my favourite. Definitely liking John now, i can't wait for another update! :)
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:28pm
  • Audrey170

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    I really wanted Colton to be Eric's :( he's such a good father.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 02:02pm
  • fly away.

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    :O <-- that's my face right now. no joke.
    if i woulda' had water in my mouth, i woulda' spit it out.
    ^ that's how shocked i was at the end of this chapter.

    colton is john's, i'm prettttty dang sure. oh my eff.
    i certainly did not see that one coming.
    john's gonna' be so pissed when he finds out.

    agh. i'm so confused right now.
    i wanna be team john right now 'cause, let's face it, he's amazing.
    but havlo is just.. HALVO. :P
    i dunno, i think i'm just gonna' be half and half right now.
    or, switzerland. yeah, i'll be switzerland. x)

    amazing chapter, as always.
    update soon please? :)
    ♥analeise.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 10:49am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    I already read it, I know. No big deal. You already know how I feel about it. ;) Woop Woop. and I actually like Colton.... and you know how I hate kids.
    July 22nd, 2011 at 09:50am
  • disappearing act.

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    So it's Eric's kid right?
    July 22nd, 2011 at 09:47am
  • ImaginaryEnemy

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    I'm like 95 percent sure that
    Colton is so Johns kid... I have
    My reasons haha.... Thought
    I love the man Eric so I shall be
    Team Halvo!
    Xoxo Zoey
    July 21st, 2011 at 09:53am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    i really wanna know what happened between addie and her now
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:29pm
  • the adventure.

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    OHHH MY GOODNESS! how have i not seen this story before?!
    Girl, I LOOOOVE this! New obsession for sure!
    Update soon, puhleasseeee?! :)
    July 20th, 2011 at 11:01am
  • DELETETHISPLEASE

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    holy shiiiiit! how have i not read this amazing story before!? i am truly amazed by your incredible ability to write! i really do enjoy it so much and am so happy to have found this story and am definitely subscribing! i am completely in love with john and micah's past relationship and her and eric's present one. if john doesn't change than i'm sticking with Team Eric because he is soooo supportive! =)

    and i am in love with the last chapter, him and her cuddling and looking at the stars but her theory of feeling connected to some stranger who was looking at the exact same stars and moon, that's exactly how i think too and it's the same theory i've put in my stories before too. we share the same opinion! i love your ability to write in depth emotion! please keep it up! <3
    July 20th, 2011 at 04:03am
  • Franceschi;

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    awww :' ( naming the star almost made me cry. John's such a sweetheartsometimes, but I'm still Team Eric. Very nice update love. I'm really into the present tense of the story, but these flashbacks are growing on me ; ) still not a fan of Addie though. she just seemed too superficial for me. I dunno. I LOVE your writing though and I can't wait for another update!
    July 19th, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • lovely youth

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    This was definitely a pro John chapter. But agh, I can't get over the awesomeness of Eric and Micah.
    July 19th, 2011 at 05:58pm
  • Fictional Bride.

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    cute flashback! although it shows a secret relationship between John & Micah. They both have a special someone but they act all couple-y when they are together, alone. I'm still Team Eric! :)
    July 19th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • ineedacatchyname

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    Ahh I'm torn! She works so well with John, but I looooove Eric.
    July 18th, 2011 at 10:11pm
  • dirt whispered.

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    I have to admit, I'm usually always just a silent reader on here. But this story is too damn good not to say anything. I love how you write. Seriously, you are one of the better writers on here. So, thank you for that. :)

    I love how you switch from the past to the present—showing how everyone's relationships have changed as well as how each person has changed and grown. Honestly, I was skeptical about where this was headed at first, but know I'm hooked. I can't wait to see where you take it. I've found myself getting excited when you update (which doesn't happen all that often).

    Keep up what your doing! Definitely don't quit writing anytime soon.
    By the way, Team John on this one. All the way. (Although Eric is just too sweet in this.)
    July 18th, 2011 at 06:16pm
  • ihatelovingyou

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    That was really sweet of John but I'm still one hundred percent team eric(:
    July 18th, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • foreveryoungx3

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    That star scene was the cutest thing I ever read !!<3
    July 18th, 2011 at 05:34pm
  • bria22

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    That was so good! Can't wait for more. :)
    July 18th, 2011 at 08:59am
  • disappearing act.

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    that was a really long chapter. nice metaphors with the sky and stuff. it was kinda saaaad.
    July 18th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    well, well, well... john and micah are in love... nbd. work on that.
    July 18th, 2011 at 08:16am
  • vivalajade

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    Oh my gosh! This was such a good chapter!
    I love eric & her together
    But then john & her have this moments that are just adorable
    He seems to really understand her but I don't know who would be better!
    Keep writing :)
    July 18th, 2011 at 08:02am
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