Telescope Eyes - Comments

I really really liked that chapter.
It was cute, especially John naming his star after her dad.
man, I love him(:
addison.. I don't like her.
she's causing trouble now.
&she's gonna cause trouble, a lot of it, later on.
I can already tell. >.<
^ lovelyhope about took all the words outta' my mouth.
i'm so tempted to be team john again.. but i'm still team eric for now.
so john, needs to apologize to Micah, or start being sweet like he used to be in the flashbacks!
amazing, phenomenal, wonderful, beautifully written, awesome. <-- even those words cannot describe how great your writing and chapters are. (:
♥analeise.

Addison seems super fake. I'm not a fan of her.
I definitely lol'd when John yelled, "Eric, don't touch her there!" Super funny. It was like pre-gaming except pre-cockblocking haha.
The telescope/star part was adorable but I'm still Team Eric (even though the flashbacks make me sway over to Team John a bit).
I still think Colton is John's. I mean his name is obviously her dad's name but it's also the name of her and John's star. I don't know...the story really makes it seem as if he's Eric's but I just have this feeling he's John's. I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

This chapter was sweet! I'm on the verge of moving to Team john right now, he was really cute in this chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

I'm still definitely team Eric. It's not that John is bad, it's just that they've both got a special someone and are happy with them, so why change that? I really liked John's story about his grandpa and the stars. It's really fitting with the new background hahaha. I really like this chapter too. Everybody was happy! Especially Addie and Micah, they were all good! nbiroslgmldslfjo I don't know what else to say.

I'm still team Eric.
I just like him more than John right now.
I mean, John's being all sneaky and going behind his girlfriend's back to hold hands with Micah and stuff and I just don't like it.
Anyway,
Awesome chapter! Update soon!!!

pretty much amazing!

i love eric and micah, they're so great together

I love Eric:) lol
I think John cheated on Addison with Micah....

Such a great story!
I don't know who to love more john or halvo
Can't wait for another chapter!

Team Eric! No matter how much I love John, Eric seems the best choice for Micah. I think Addison hates Micah because John and her slept together. It doesn't seem as though Colton is Eric's because he always says that he loves the little guy, not his son. Anywho, I really love his story and I hope you update soon! :)

I have definitely made up my mind with what team i'm on right now, and it has to be Eric. This chapter was great, one of my favourites! Can't wait for more :)

I'm Team Eric in the present chapters and Team John in the flashbacks.
Definitely.

Alright, for starters, I'm Team Eric all the way : ) I just found this story and I'm absolutely hooked. I've already subscribed and I can just tell this is going to be one of those stories that I hopelessly wait for every update. Also, I'd like to mention that you are a simply amazing writer, just simply amazing. All seven chapters so far have been beautiful and I will definitely be looking into your other stories because this is written so fucking well.It makes me jealous. Lol, and lastly, I want to talk about this last chapter you wrote. Like seriously? It's fucking fantastic. I am Team Eric so you can just imagine why I loved the end, but the middle was just great too. I don't exactly hate John because the way you write all the scenes between him Micah, they're just too freaking beautiful to hate. Addison, on the other hand, I don't like. I kind of think John and Micah slept together, and that's why she's so bitter but she did not need to rub it in Micah's face that John chose her. I just don't really really like her right now. Maybe she'll grow on me. Maybe.
So summary of extremely long comment :: this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time; you are one fucking fantastic amazing writer; and Eric should so win her heart after it all : )

I'm thinking that John and Addison were going out and then John either broke up with her for Micah or cheated on her with Micah, but then went running back to her so Micah went running to Eric and now they have Colton...unless Colton is really John's but she just says he's Eric's. Yeah, that's my guess. Colton is actually John's. Still team Eric though.

I feel Micah and Addie aren't friends anymore because her and John slept with one another. Has to be something like that. Well that was a great chapter I can't wait for the next one:)

Team Eric definitely. Not because John was acting like a douche in this, but because Eric does seem like the best one for her. It just seems like she needs to get over John first from whatever happened with them (WHICH I WOULD GLADLY LIKE TO KNOW) because Eric is still waiting for her. Also, what is up with Addie?! Did John and Micah really do the nasty? Addie needs to learn that people don't hold grudges for this long and that she is truly the immature one for holding onto it for so long! I don't think I like Addie. She's a liar and seems really conniving. I loooove this!

Team Eric still. He's so cute and caring while John seems like a complete ass. And his girlfriend! Who the hell is she to say things like that to Micah. I think the reason is that John and Micah slept together and thats what she means when she says she's only made love once before Eric. It sucks because Addison seems like such a bitch and Micah seems so nice. It made me pretty sad when Micah said she wasn't going to make the mistake of not using a condom because Colton seems like her everything. Oh well, thats just me over thinking things! Amazing chapter! <3

I'm on Team Eric but I feel like that's about to change soon. Addison telling John the exact opposite of what really happened in the bathroom makes me so angry. John believing her was probably even worse. Great update though! :D

I love this story! Eric's wonderful to Micah but I think she's just using him as a sort of comfort blanket to harbour all the things that happened in the past. Also, Micah should have drowned Addison in the toilet, the nassssty bitch.

I think that John is in love with her, but I agree with everything Eric said
Micah should choose him and get over John
And Addison is a bitch