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  • learningtobefree

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    oh shit. glad you updated- thank you!
    defo on team John :)
    November 1st, 2011 at 01:16am
  • becauseiamfree

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    i want her and john to finally be together!
    i mean she even said herself that she is sick and tierd of his apologies and john has always been there for her!
    im team john here!
    <3
    October 31st, 2011 at 05:09pm
  • allzac

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    Did not see that coming. I can't wait for the next few chapters they are going to be interesting :)
    October 31st, 2011 at 12:50pm
  • thescenekid

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    Oh God that was intense! I find this story really mysterious, hence I don't have any idea on what's going to happen next! I just wish John and Micah would man the eff up already! Ugh this is so frustrating but I love it!! I seriously can't wait for the next chapter... which is in present, right?
    October 31st, 2011 at 07:02am
  • ineedacatchyname

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    With every chapter I hate Addison more and more...
    October 31st, 2011 at 06:55am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    Addison is a slut. I mean, I knew she was a huge whorey bitch from the get go, but this is just out of control. Eric? Really? Ugh. Trading John for Eric... so foolish. Solid update my friend. God, I need to know what happens next!!! You have me all nervous!
    October 31st, 2011 at 06:46am
  • Swallowedbythesea;

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    I always get so stoked when this story is updated! I think Micah will end up back with Eric and the whole situation is going to get even messier! Cant wait for the next chapter!
    October 31st, 2011 at 06:45am
  • maddizzlle

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    I freaking love this story! :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
    October 31st, 2011 at 06:44am
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    I'll be honest, I know that tomorrow never comes, but shit, that cliffhanger has me on the edge of my seat!
    He wants to talk to her, she wants to sort things out and Colton is stuck in the middle, being the cute, adorable little kid he is.
    Even if Halvo is just being an adorable guy, helping out with everything, I'm falling into Team John.
    I don't know...there's something about that guy...
    Love it, hopefully tomorrow comes sooner. ;)
    October 14th, 2011 at 03:42pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    yayayay! Everything is finally going to get sorted out between Micah and John! Except not. But I mean, he does understand that she really is the best mother that she can be for Colton and that she really doesn't seem him as a mistake and then John is gonna like shit himself if he hasn't already but if he has then he will again and will just be huge mindfuck for him! I'm excited for the next two chapters!!
    October 7th, 2011 at 01:10am
  • lovelyhope

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    Needless to say, I can't wait for John and Micah's conversation.
    I wanted to hit Shelley when she said something about Micah being in love with John (Micah needs to be with Eric!). Haha, okay I didn't really want to hit her but seriously....
    Also, I'm glad Shelley decided to keep her baby.
    October 6th, 2011 at 06:08pm
  • becauseiamfree

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    john better be calm and not go crazy and all when they have their conversation...
    cant wait for more <3
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:35pm
  • thescenekid

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    Oh wow. This is killing me. I really can't wait for everything!!! AHHHH!!!!
    October 6th, 2011 at 12:31pm
  • Leaaaaaaaah.

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    I'm looking forward to the chapter when they 'talk'. Great chapter by the way :)
    October 6th, 2011 at 06:18am
  • thatswhatshesaid0

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    God dammit!
    Two more chapters until I find out how this talk goes down?
    You're killing me, Ketely!
    October 6th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • Swallowedbythesea;

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    John better be supportive. I just want him and Colton to officially meet. OMG, UPDATE THIS ASAP! I am dying over here.
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • bottle bohemia

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    still extremely torn. her and halvo are so precious together. but something about her and john just seems right.
    October 6th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    oh, nerd girl.... you know how nervous I am now!?!?!?! God, so nervous!!!!!! Adios, Halvo.
    October 6th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • bottle bohemia

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    aw John was jealous. silly John.
    I'm excited to see where it goes from here. I wish the next chapter would be what happens next at this age haha
    October 1st, 2011 at 10:44pm
  • lovelyhope

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    Normally I like how this story goes from present to past but right now I'm hating it because I want to know what's going down with John and Micah in the present since he now knows.
    It seems as if John's been in love with Micah the entire time since he was being all rude about her and Halvo.
    September 30th, 2011 at 02:59am
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