The Pretender - Comments

Yay, grouphug! *joins grouphug*

Amazing update! It' so sweet (or stupid, I'm not sure yet) of Frank to feel sympathy for Bert, I mean the dude has hardly been nice to him before... And Gerard wants to learn how to be sweet and forgiving from Frank! Adorableness, that is.

btw, I really can't imagine Bert McC with a shaved head! :XD It's just too weird, ^^ and I love his long messy, dirty black hair too much.. :tehe:

Beautiful update, hun! :arms:

O.O
Bertie, I'm good lol
love this update.
More soon I hope :)

Yaah, tis true, that update did not have as much detail as I wanted.. but I had about 5 minutes to write it xD So the next one wil hopefully make up for it =]

LOVE YOU ALL. :arms:

-MY COMMENT EXPLODED!-
*cries*

It was amazing.... gah.

Well a summary of it would be: Loved the update, Bert should die, what's Bert going to say? Poor Frankie, you rock and I cannot wait to see what happens next...

But it had so much more detail... >.<
Gah.
Well I'll copy it before I click submit next time T_T
Love Clever Cookie.
[Lol, thankies for the deds.]
xoxo

Bert! I knew it, mwhahahah.
What'shegonnasay????
Maybe a little less detail then I would have liked, but still a kick-ass chapter =)
Keep it up! *crosses fingers for poor frankie*
btw I love officer kherri now =)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

MORE SOON!!!
luv
~moi

I knew it was bert!!!! Haha and your welcome for that kick in the butt. XP I actually updated mine too! We're on a roll! >high five<

Great update!

I hope everything turns out okay in the trial!

:arms:

HA! I'M AMAZING!
Lmao! :D

I love this story, but I'd have liked to have seen more detail in this chapter.
I understand that you didn't have time though. XD

ILY! xxxxx

Yay, deds xD

Awesome update, but seriously, poor Frankie! And what's Bert going to say? :O

Edit:: Page claim!! I call it .....

STAY STRONG FRANKIE!!

poor frankie ... berts not a good sign

good job

good job

YAY! an update!

When you get back, I hope you update.

Gah, that was amazing. I loved the part where Frank was talking about burying his head in the lawyer's shoulder. I found it cute.

Anyway, great chapter. More soon, perhaps?

i want deds!
just because i can?
please. hehehe.
great update.

You should update this!! =]

this is an awsome story not to mention an amazing update!

is the prisoner bert? i think so, but im not sure! hmmmmm, what a conundrum!

YAY! I loves this update!
is it Bertie??

lol, Frank's little zone out was funny :) "I wonder if his wife looks like Julia Roberts? I hope not, for his sake..." :lmfao:

BERT MCCRACKEN!
-gah-
sorry... I'm probably completly wrong. xD
Awesome update"
Beth
xoxo