The Pretender - Comments

Nooo that's nasty! You left us a cliffy =[ I hope that bastard is found guilty!

THE. WAIT. WAS. MORE. THAN. WORTH IT.
That was freaking fantastic!!!!!!!!!! Gerard is SO sweet, and he had some good points, too. *sniffle* Jury women, you know what to do.
More soon! You and your darn cliffhangers =P

luv
~moi

Haha! They've won the croud!! :D

Aw, I hope they win! :D

i dont care how long your updates take, just as long as i get to read them, IM PERFECTLY FINE!

It's a good thing you updated. I was about to give you another kick in the butt! Good update!

Awww! That was so cute!

More soon?

:) more soon?

xD
wow, you remind me of a friend of mine, xD
writing the chapter on paper
and then LOSING the paper
xDDDD

EDIT! Page claim!
I call it;
Paper Chaos
In dedication of all those who have ever lost papers
=P

haha! wow, i DID read this story already, xD
but im going to keep re-reading cuz i love this story so much
=P

lawlz, i like how frankie passes out in mid-sentance, lawlz!

I'm having the feeling that I've read this already, but I don't give a dang, lol! I'm re-reading it if I have then, and still loving it, xD.

Yay Your BACK!
This story is brilliantly written! <3
And also I think I may be addicted, lets wait and see hehe!
O.o Bert! He might lie, lets hope Frank and Gee stay together!<3
Loved it from the start! Please keep updating!
Update?
If you do skittles will find you :)
Red, green yellow and other colours galore! : DD

UH... hasn't it been months?

you're lucky I didn't give up on you. I actually was going to unsubscribe, because I thought you had abandoned the story... and then you had an update.

welcome back! :)

I must say, it was worth the wait. Absolutly fabulous!
Update soon I hope :)

Damn, you're not dead? I thought I did a better job than that...
Lmao, joking! :arms:

Aw, Bert. I actually do feel sorry for him. I was loling for a while about his shaved head! :lmfao
Oh wow, can't wait for the next chapter and for Frank to go to the witness' stand.
Brilliant, as always.

you can do it frankie!

wow, you're not dead yet. nice update btw love

YAY!! group hug! lol

FANTASTIC chapter!!yay you're back!!!!!!
well at least bert was honest.... ihad this horrible feeling he was going to do something stupid to screw it all up, but he did good. Even though he kinda is a bastard.
*gets nervous for frank* come on frankie! do good! come on!!!!

more soon! can't wait =)

luv
~moil

OH YEAH she's back!!!
And with a wicked update at that!! Loved it with good ole Mr McCracken!
I can't wait to see what happens when Franks put on the stade,,, is he gonna get horribly cross examined by the defence!
xxx