I'll Jump for You - Comments

I really think that this story has a lot of potential but you have to be really, really careful because you're playing with such a cliche plot and you really have to make it your own so it just doesn't fall under a huge generalization.

The narration, but mostly the dialog seems a bit forced and unrealistic. I guess you could say that they're German and the language barrier might be making them sound different than most people, but just be careful with that. Because I only get to know your characters through what they say and if what they say isn't believable then the character just isn't believable.

But yeah, great potential, keep working on this and polishing it.

I just finished chapter 2 and this story is so amazing. I am totally going to keep reading! I really want to see what happens next and Ill probably end up writing you several comments as I go along :)

It sounds weird but I kinda like how her family is so against her. It's tragic but it makes it so interesting to read and I really feel for her. I want to see what happens next!

Good job :)
I think this one of my favorite fanfics ever :)

Another brilliant chapter, nice work.

Alrightey, going to get dressed and fix my hair, and update will be fairly soon :)

Absolutely :)

This story is brilliant! I hope to see more! <3 !!

Hmm i sense someone is not telling the whole truth; but yeah I love plz keep updating

I have updated alot today :) I am proud of myself! LOL, anywho let me know what you think. I would like to know what people are thinking before I post some more :) Trust me I believe I have the best idea on how I want this story to go, and I do not think it is gonna be pretty :p So please keep reading and please let me know what you think. Comments are appreciated :)

Alritey, I am in the middle of writing a good upsate :) Or at least I think its good :p I have to go to work soon so I will finish it when I get home of it is not already finished and post some more later. I am hoping to at least update twice if not 3 times which is my goal. I have so many amazing ideas for this story and all the twists and turns that it could possibly take. Comments are greatly appreciated and am glad that people are actually reading it :) I have not written a fan fic in a couple years but this one has come to me because I am going through a tough time and this is what helps me focus all my frustration and anger. I have realized that I write better stories this way. Some of it is based on true events and some of it comes completely from my imagination. :) Thanks for reading and please comment!

Absolutely all the Ifs :) I guess you will have to keep reading to find out! I am glad you like this one :)

Aww sha, I love this. Comment virginity... =]
And what if Georg didn't' forget about her? And she's guessing wrong?
Oh, all the ifs...