March 1st, 2011 at 09:08pm
They're so cute. And stuborn darn boys.
Way to end an argument Troy.
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March 1st, 2011 at 03:28am
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Whoo!
I was waiting for that kiss all chapter.
You made me feel as if I wasn't going to get it.
But then I did and for that, I am eternally grateful <3
Hurry and update!
I wanna know what 'it's on' means.
It sounds like something I like :)March 1st, 2011 at 02:12am -
loved the update! way to keep my intrest :) plz update soon, I love your story!March 1st, 2011 at 02:11am
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when i first read the summary i was worried i was going to hate but i thought i'd give it a chance an i'm so glad i did. i was reading an earlier comment about how this didn't happen and this is 2011 but it does still happen especially in the deep south. i've been to stone mountain monument and in one of the all white, rich, confederate flag waving neighborhoods- trust me they are racist and sexist (not to say that being from the south makes this way i just know there are places like this in the south).February 28th, 2011 at 06:50am
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i find great enjoyment in this storyFebruary 28th, 2011 at 12:19am
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Lmao Troy and his black victory dance €=February 27th, 2011 at 06:12am
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Oh my god,I love your story!!!!! Please write more=).February 26th, 2011 at 07:38am
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So I just read you update for Chap. 9 and though it was short it was still VERY good. I'm excited waiting for your next update. I really appreciate your chracter Chester, because I think there are kids like that everywhere and I'm glad you showed that some white people like to be like black people too. All your chracters I can seem to find someone I know to relate to them so thumbs up on that! But I've got this 1 PROBLEM: I just can't picture Troy, I know that he's big and black but I can't picture his face. Do you have chracter pictures? I really like to be able to see the chracters when I read, so even if you just mesage me and describe him... That'd be good. Thanks! I love your story anyways though :)February 26th, 2011 at 06:36am
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You make it seem like something bad is about to hapen.
Please don't let something bad hapen.
Things were just starting to look (slightly) up.February 26th, 2011 at 04:39am -
I just started reading this and I love it.
Where I live there is racism but it's also very ethnically diverse.
I love how you don't bother censoring any offensive terms.
It makes the story honest and real.
I think Troy and Liam are just soo cute!
I'm glad Liam finally admitted to having feelings for Troy.
This story is amazing, can't wait for more! <3February 25th, 2011 at 02:03am -
i LOVE this!
aww they kissed!
can't wait for more!
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Sushigfhskgadfhgaidsg.
THIS IS SO CUTE
Like
Seriously this is one of the cutest stories I have read.
<333February 23rd, 2011 at 10:57pm -
Oops! That whole last part wasn't supposed to be italicized.
Faaaaail.February 23rd, 2011 at 08:30pm -
Awwwww...!
I love this story so much that I recommended it to my buddy, Nicole, whose username is Nytestalker
Even though I absolutely adored all of this, I'ma focus on the kiss.
Because obviously, that was my favorite part :D
I love that even though Liam still thinks ethnic slurs in his head, he openly likes Troy. I just think it’s hilarious that he can go from saying, “I caught him doing a black victory dance down the street.” to saying, “We both had feelings we knew we had about each other; it didn’t need to be discussed any further.”
But I found a little tiny error in the last paragraph or so. I know it’s hypocritical of me to point it out even though I said that I didn’t care about those things, but I think that maybe you’d want to know. So:
Troy, suddenly looked constipated, leaned forward awkwardly, and gave me a quick goodbye peck straight on my lips.
I think it should be: Troy, suddenly looking constipated, leaned forward awkwardly and gave me a goodbye peck straight on my lips.
It’s just the way the commas are – no biggie. I feel kind of bad for pointing that out though. Like, I feel all snobby.
Have I ever mentioned how I love how much detail you put into this? Because I do.
A lot.
Okay, now I’m going to gush about the kiss!
I love how you described it so perfectly. Instead of saying something bland like:
We kissed, and it was like fireworks.”
You put in some detail, like about the shock and Liam seeing Troy’s “bushy, black” features up close. And I think it’s charming that they both tasted like curry :3
And I can relate to Liam. I always smile stupidly around crushes, too :3
Update soon? And yeah, it’d be great if you could notify me. Mibba doesn’t have a thingie where you’re notified when your friends’ stories are updated. I mean, sure I’m subscribed to this, but I never check my email.
So yeah, a notification would be nice :DFebruary 23rd, 2011 at 08:29pm -
awwwwwww *_* so cuteFebruary 23rd, 2011 at 02:19pm
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A black victory dance! LOL
So funny.
I am far too sleep depraved to comment in depth about these last two amazing chapters.
Good job.
*passes out*February 23rd, 2011 at 05:23am -
i am i love with your story
first of its completly and utterly amazing and it is so well written it is not to racist or one of those flambouent gay slashes its a nice story keep writting ill keep reading!!February 23rd, 2011 at 04:53am -
You are a god.
I really wish I could say more but I'm physically incapable of writing more than that.
This story is so good and true.
You have surpassed my realm of comprehension.
Which could be perceived as a bad thing but I assure you, it is not.
That kiss? It made me want to hug you. So so much.
It was....mind blowig.
You blow my mindFebruary 23rd, 2011 at 03:49am -
I absolutely LOVE this story! It's so adorable an fluffy, yet depicts the harsh reality of racism at the same time. MIbba needed this story!
<3February 23rd, 2011 at 02:41am
Go Troy!