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  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Are you going to update this anytime soon? I really miss it. ):
    August 22nd, 2013 at 10:18pm
  • xneverletmegox

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    Update as soon as you can I'm loooovvvvviiiiiiinnnnnnggggggg this story, and keep the Paul assholeness coming that shit is funny. :)
    November 13th, 2012 at 02:59am
  • stallion duck.

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    Same here :/
    October 15th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • celestial_royalty

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    I thought Delilah had landed in poison ivy in chapter 15 ;P guess you're not that mean though. 16- We had to go back inside when Hadley started craving a cigarette. There was nothing I wanted less than her nicotine-free mood, so I suggested we went inside. Lool. "But Hadley only shrugged. “Or maybe he's just afraid you'll kill him in his sleep if he does.”" love Hadley. I really want to know what happened between her and Chris- put it in soon???? I love Hadley's attitude, even though I don't relate to the pot-part, it would be just like me (or rather, it is) to go after the heartbreaking tattooed muscular one. :( PUT IT IN!!! I WANNA KNOW!!!

    OH! And I liked the smackdownm with the doctor too. I would love if my mom laughed at me doing that...I'm still debating in my head if she would, or if she would scold me. “Well I need someone to help me with my master plan that involves bringing Paul down to his knees and beg for me to spare his life.” mhm. I liked the bra too. Why didn't she use sharpie?

    "Summer in Forks was not funny." That's funny. First, Second and Third beach...*snort* 21- Why is Delilah so weird and chill about her mother's possible affairs with a postman or a gardener?

    “Oh my god, Bella, someone stole your radio!” I exclaimed and looked around the truck, as if evidence might magically show up to clarify who had done it. “You... you took it out?” I asked confusedly. “Were you hungry or something?” HA- then there shouldn't have been any radio problems for Delilah to begin with!

    His body levitated from the mattress and in the short second he was in the air, he let out a squeal of shock and rolled to his side, only to be met by... nothing. He fell flat onto the floor with a loud dunk. bahahaha “Great. I've never been proposed to before.” me neither!
    He stared at me for a whole 5 seconds before saying seriously, “You have issues. I might seriously have to break up with you.”

    I snorted. “Good luck telling your mo-” Ha, Nathan's eye jokes are so bad. I love the competitiveness between Delilah and Paul. Since 4th grade, that's so cute. 27- Drunk Delilah is so cute...wet cigarette, haha so poetic. You have a lot of typos but nothing I cared enough to quote- one is "aloud" instead of "allowed" in regards to Delilah drinking.

    “Erryday, erryday, fuck what anybody say... can't see em cause the money in da way... real nigga, whaddup!” I sang/rambled.

    “Please, stop...” hahaha I would be Embry in this situation... Oh, and I wanna know also why Jared is so weird around Delilah. I know it's not going to be some stupid attraction drama. So do tell.

    --Mathia
    October 13th, 2012 at 10:31pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    Chapter 3 is funny. I love Delilah's description of the truck. First fun thing I've read so far. " I put my dignity before my life: “I told you not to call me that,” I wheezed out." hahahahaha. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW "I always knew that you would come back to me." AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! "She pulled one out and lit it, opening her window in the process. “So, other than for showing me Lilah's disloyalty, why did you come here and disturb my nap?” No wonder she had been in such a bad mood." hahaha
    October 13th, 2012 at 08:19pm
  • JustThinking

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    This is always a mix of sadness and something else for me while reading.. Hmm... Still a good story. Smile
    October 13th, 2012 at 07:46pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    Oh NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I saved a bunch of scattered quotes and comments all over 3 different laptops and lost them!!! O: I distinctly remember the beaver quote being one of my favorites, and a huge AWW about someone or other...might've been embry maybe not. Um...well fuck. I'll have to re-read the whole bloody thing again -_- I do like it though...parts. I believe liked the Hadley-Charlie part, as well as an Actual funny one with Bella. Shockingly.
    October 13th, 2012 at 11:32am
  • fuyu-aki

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    hi hi KillLui i was soooo happy to see that issues had been updated i have been in love with this story for a very long time and i cant wait to see how the story progresses. :) well update when you can and enjoy writing :D
    October 12th, 2012 at 06:59am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    This story is great! I can't believe you are losing motivation for this wonderful story!
    I was so happy that you updated this. :)
    Please don't make us wait so long for the next update?
    October 12th, 2012 at 12:20am
  • AllTimeBatman

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    Please update ASAP, I freaking love this story :)
    October 7th, 2012 at 07:01am
  • Synyster Gates;

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    I just found this story and I love it.
    October 3rd, 2012 at 07:37pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    Paul is an ass. That's all I have to say.

    No, wait. I lied. It was another WONDERFUL update, my dear. :)
    August 28th, 2012 at 02:37am
  • skinny love.

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    Can I please hit Paul with a tuna fish?
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:14am
  • stallion duck.

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    Paul's a dick.
    August 25th, 2012 at 03:42am
  • JustThinking

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    I get it, the whole money and writing thing. Also; YAY! You're alive! I can cancel the search party now! Hehe xD goo chapter. Smile
    August 24th, 2012 at 06:49pm
  • AhWhit!

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    Yay!! I came to read this as soon as I got my email about a new chapter! And I am so happy that If i knew how to do a cartwheel without breaking my ankle, I'd do it. I totally understand why you didn't update though. I'm in the process of looking for a job while I'm in college and...it can be depressing.
    So....I was actually really surprised to see Paul's POV up but really glad at the same time. He's a fun, hotheaded character and it was great to get his POV on things. I'm excited to see more Jake and Delilah action after the whole make out thing and Jake learning more about the night Embry took Delilah home (maybe?). More soon?
    August 24th, 2012 at 02:40am
  • skinny love.

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    That flashback was so cute. omg.
    CONGRATS EVEN THOUGH I ALREADY KNEW ABOUT THAT.
    I'm still coming to visit you, eh? (;
    This depresses me though.
    This story. I just... why did you tell me o.o
    The glitter in the hair reminds me of me, legit. hahahaha.
    I woke up - WITH NO HANGOVER CAUSE I AM AMAZING, and there was glitter all over me. :D
    Anywhore - I've caught on to that, thank you very much. I'm glad you've found inspiration to write again, i know it is going to turn out great in the end. Well...... I mean.
    FUCK.
    Okay I love you bye now :D
    June 29th, 2012 at 05:21pm
  • JustThinking

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    Hehe, Anywhore xD giid luck? And congrats on graduating! Sounds like you have quite the year to look forward to and a party week and so on. Lucky you.

    Anyways, the extra info is nice. I'm starting to wonder once more how this is going to go. If the end for Delilah will be as bad as I'm thinking it might be, at least I know Liam will be there for her. I don't know. My future thoughts about this is a little depressing. Just like Delilah.

    Good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more.
    June 26th, 2012 at 04:22pm
  • Death_to_Roses

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    NO! I will NOT drop a comment, thank you very much! I just wanted to comment on that comment. Please update soon. :D
    June 26th, 2012 at 05:52am
  • peace.love.wolves

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    Oh my gosh!!!! I almost started to cry that is so sad but amazing!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!
    June 26th, 2012 at 05:26am