It's 3:30 am, and I'm awake only because I happened upon your story, and happened to completely adore it. I've been giggling along with it for quite sometime now. I absolutely loove your writing style, and I adore the characters and how you portray everyone. I cannot wait to see what happens next! I was definitely on the edge of my seat reading this. I couldn't even leave it to go to bed. I can't wait for your next update! And, Merry Christmas and Happy New Years.(Just in cas eyou don't update before then so I don't have the chance to comment again.) =)
I thank you for neglecting your school work for us and updating this story, It was just what I needed. You have officailly saved my day, also if you don't update again before christmas which you said was very likely, than happy holidays to you too =)
hmm.. I can honorstly say I didn't see this whole Nate ordeal coming, but it was awesome!and I can't wait to read Jacob and Delilah's conversation.. or yelling match.. or something.. I'm wondering if she will try and punch him.. or beat him with a stick! xD
By the way, i know the chapter had a natural endning there.. but.. HOW CAN YOU END IT THERE AND THEN SAY YOU PROBABLY WON*T UPDATE UNTIL BASICALLY NEXT YEAR! Just to make it clear, I'm not mad, I'm just so curious it's kind of killing me right now... *takes in calming breath* but I'll just have to wait until you update again. No matter how long it may take..
Thank you for neglecting your studies for us, although cliffhangers are like devil's sperm. I can't wait to see what happens. I think she's dreaming about Liam, but I'm not sure... Oh well, I guess I'll just have to wait to find out... But hopefully not that long, right? :D
Omg he kissssed her XD yes cute! I loved the part were nates mom walked in....classic. I wanna know who that dream was about! O.O write soon! Keep on rockin
i loved this update :D it was packed full of stuff, and so damn long! not to keep you away from school work and such but please do update again soon; it could be a collective christmas present :D happy holidays!
Aww man.. no psycho killer in the woods with an ax?? Oh well, guess it's time for a horror movie anyways.. x) and the whole thing you mentioned with Jacob in the author note.. the only thought that popped into my mind was "well, duh!" just thought it should be said. other than that, it was a REALLY good hapter and I'm hoping for more soon =)
OHMYGOSH I DID NOT MEAN TO PUT THAT LAST COMMENT UP THERE.
"Two words. TEAM NATHAN! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THEM GO OUT or at least make the line between friendship and love a little more blurry! I looooooooooove Nathan! And his mom is awesome! And I kinda think that he might like Delilah, you know?
Or maybe team Liam, if you decide to take that route...
Anyways, amazing, crazy, suspenseful, hilarious, and heartbreaking upload! I am so glad you kept Nathan alive, and I honestly kind of saw it coming. I mean, you couldn't kill Nathan; that would be like killing Jacob in Eclipse or something. It's insanity.
I was thinking of this story, you know, imagining different endings and whatnot because I have no life, and I was thinking, what if Delilah was an insomniac? Could lead to some sticky situations. Or you could bring Liam back! You might have to edit the way he died, though, just to make it a little more believable.
Upload again soon! Lots of love(:"
I wrote that thinking I was on my Mibba account, but I was on the Project Fiction account by accident because I work for them, and I accidentally left myself signed on while asking another author for something so when I was notified via email on my own email that your story was updated, I clicked on the link thinking I was signed on to this account. And then when It said Project Fiction I freaked out because I couldn't delete it, so this is Niki! Not Project Fiction! Ignore that last comment!
Two words. TEAM NATHAN! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE THEM GO OUT or at least make the line between friendship and love a little more blurry! I looooooooooove Nathan! And his mom is awesome! And I kinda think that he might like Delilah, you know?
Or maybe team Liam, if you decide to take that route...
Anyways, amazing, crazy, suspenseful, hilarious, and heartbreaking upload! I am so glad you kept Nathan alive, and I honestly kind of saw it coming. I mean, you couldn't kill Nathan; that would be like killing Jacob in Eclipse or something. It's insanity.
I was thinking of this story, you know, imagining different endings and whatnot because I have no life, and I was thinking, what if Delilah was an insomniac? Could lead to some sticky situations. Or you could bring Liam back! You might have to edit the way he died, though, just to make it a little more believable.
I'm so glad you didn't kill Nathan! I would've cried... well maybe not but still. I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Is she going to go see Jacob in the morning? Or is she just going to ignore him? And what does she mean he wasn't talking to her? He was talking to her for the most part, just not when he was talking to Nathan.