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Okay, I'm totally contradicting but what the hell, I love Treason and how you painted his character, it's so perfect, he's perfect okay! I can't wait when he'll meet Gian. Total fangirl squeal!

Yeah, you should definitely get something out within the week *slow nod* and if it has Treason dear in it, I have no issues XD

Great update (:

I just started reading and I got sad because...well... no new chapter...well, no chapter 17. Or was it 16? I forget. Anywho, I honestly love how the characters are developing. I mean, I know you described it in the chapters (which normally, I find really well...not worth reading but this is such and interesting story with characters to match it's amazing, it makes me smile. I love Treason and Gian and L'von(sp?) and Bradley LOL. He's a side character probably, right?)

Okay, well, I'm subbing and can't wait to see the next chapter :D

this is cruelty to animals. torture, really. you better update soon. =D

This is so fucking amazing. I love Treason and his character. He needs a much needed hug. But I'm glad he's gettin somewhere with himself and maybe thinkin of lettin Gain in? I hope so(:
Love this and can't wait for more :D

I'm extremely happy with this! So much so that no amount of shriking, words, print, or typing can even sufice! Though, I do kinda feel bad for Treason. I mean, it must such being told that and even
more by your brother. Is this what provoked that whole " iv been with you forever!" thing the other day? Let me tell you, cheesy but sweet. Well, as sweet as you can get.
Gian is gay, so gay how could Treason not know? Like I said, in my mind he swishes.
I said it before and I'll say it again(if you think you're alive then you're better off dead) I hate typing on your iPod and will blame all errors in this comment on the fact that I am doing so right now.

I just realized that I read your co-write with O.o? I think. It has a character named Killian in it.
Also I love this story, it's amazing!

I love it and Bridge to therabitha is soooooo fucking sad

That. Fucking. Movie. *intense glare* XD
Anyway! :D Oh GSA meetings, never been to one, though I did get harassed about going by one of the girls in my class to share my "different sexual outlook" *facepalm* it'll be interesting to watch the growth of Treason. Which sounds like a novel or romance movie set in the 1700s in Switzerland. Or Sweden. Somewhere in Northern Europe.

I'm still disappointed that it wasn't a horse, I mean I got my hopes up any everything and what do I get? A boat. A fucking boat. You can't pet or love or care emotionally for/with a boat. Without looking and sounding insane, that is.
Wow, Gian is just like a magnet. I'm thinking it's becasue he's "hot" but it could e that they do it to everyone that's new. I wouldn't know, I go to WiHi. But how the fuck would you know! Grah, frustration is forming for no reason at all.
Gian should have followed Treason, I mean, sure he would have looked like a creeper, but then I wouldn't have been forced to read about this Skipper chick. Not that I don't like your characters, I just naturally don't like people like that(Who does?). <----Is that period supposed to be there?
"Why are you always with that black guy?" favorite line of the whole chapter so far, I was thinking about it later and made myself chock on my own spit. But I didn't tell you until now because I knew you'd make fun of me. You know, now that I think about it, it was probably still that funny(funnier, actually) to me became it was past 12. Everything is funny past 12.
Sorry this comment is not great or helpful or whatever, but I'm too lazy to thing of a good one right now, I just want to watch Harry potter.

Just listen to "Sleigh Ride" and say it's not CHRISTMAS music, it's winter music and you miss that season XD
One thing: "milenea" is not a word, I think you mean "Millennia"? Which is an ugly ass word to spell and look at, and I'm like, double L's and N's? WTF English language, WTF.
Okay, the chapter! :D
Skipper sounds like one of those people that could be decently nice if you're alone with her but not in a group situation. Or she's Regina George. Somehow. But Bradley seems nice~ He reminds me of this guy Collin Bradley that I went to school with last year :)

I love it :)
I don't praticulurly like skipper tho too "I believe every rumor type" I hate rumors >.<
I like Bradley tho :)

For some reason, I adore this chapter. I should have been longer, you're a bad author. Kidding kidding.
Btu I really did like this chapter, I don't know why, I guess it's becasue I love Treason so much and the idea of him saving someone. I actually think it's becasue I've been reading so much yaoi and I've gone so fangirl lately that every chivalrousness thing has made me either squeal or get this really dorky smile feeling. Not that Treason is particularly chivalrous, but close enough. But I do think he should have stayed longer instead of going to the music room.
Oh, and once again, he is really blunt. He's accepted these 'walls' way to much too, like he believes in them so much that they're either fake or he's going to blur something out about it one day becasue it's always in the front of his mind. Whatever, let me stop rambling
Awesome chapter.

Wooow. I really like this. It's one of your few stories that start from scratch. I love your characters: the dark mystery and the hyper new kid. It's so cute and I really love where it's going
. Plus of course you always add in some different, ethnic groups which I somehow seem to have a problem doing hahaha. Anyway awesome story, can't wait to read more

^ I concur.
Treason you are just getting yourself nowhere, boy. It's kind cute x)

Being left alone in a pit of rabid wolves wouldn't be very good.

:)

You shouldn't even be worrying about being late.
I should.

I have decided to forgive you. But just this once 8| XD nah, I love you
That market scene played out in my mind so perfectly, even though I imagined it as an 80s montage with L'von holding a ghetto blaster wearing sunglasses while Gian danced through, throwing shit in the cart. We should do one of those one day x)
Did I ever tell you L'von has the same name as my cousin's middle name? Except his is spelled Lavon