Jagged Edges - Comments

Okay, first, tingles. The teacher said tingles. I live him ready. But his name reminds me of dinosaurs which I could live without. Okay, well, o ready do, but you get it.
So, while reading I noticed how many 'ands' where in there. you might want to consider putting in a as when your tlking about actions because ands get a liftle repitive. (or at least to me, I don't know about anyone else. Plus, I am a bit crazy).
Treason so pissed me off! (i didn't want to freak put on your room, so my inside freaked put instead(hens the breathing)). It is not his brothers fault, these walls, they're of his own stupid doing. He can not blame other people for his misery. He just can't seem to take responsibility for his own downfall. My god, how much I want to slap him right now.
Oh, and your tummy makes nice noises.
(of there are any misspells or things that don't make sens, I'm blaming your iPod)

I love Treason XD

It's definitely not too anything, whatever that was supposed to mean. I always enjoy Treason's POV, it's so nice
I enjoy this song ^-^ it's calming. I could write to it. The thing I like most about it is probably the harmonies, cos the singers do so well and three-shot? Sounds intriguing *twists goatee*
And why nooooot? I can't go to Texas or anywhere else, Cancun seems nice D: can I go to Siberia?

I like this story a lot! The new chapter was funny. :D

Come onnnnnnnnnn college!!! xD
Gian's dad looks like he could smash your head like a walnut with his bicep o.O
I see Ivy also knows about the Soviet spies *looks around shiftily* I shouldn't even be saying I know anything about them because then they might harvest my brain *puts on moustache, moves to Cancun*
This chapter is awesome, but then this whole story is awesome, so it's expected :D

Hey.
So I feel bad, because I'm commenting on your story right now.
I suck, and I'll update tomorrow.
Bye.
(PS. Loved the chapter. I like Ivy :3)

Yaaaay! I'm happy I made ur day. I like making people happy! :) anywayz, Gian's dad would scare the crap outta me. Really. I like Everyone new. Especially Ivy. She kinds reminds me of myself. Except I don't think soviets are gonna harvest my brain for alien expirimentation. I was laughing alot. Thanks for the update! :}

Rumors piss me off ...someone started a rumor that one of my closest guy friends raped one of his close girl, friends he's not that type of person (sorry about my mini rant)
I love this story

I seriously just looked to see if you could be reported for the story being too awesome. No, u can't. If u could, you'd be reported like a million times already! :)

I think the links making up our story are half the colors of the rainbow by now.
You've broadcasted it everywhere! Haha

I love it
Treason's awesome :) so is L'von

This is a great story!!!

Fuck AP Euro >:( that class sucks.
Anywhoo! I enjoy Treason's point of view, it sounds like me. Particularly about how he can only stand three people at his school.

WHYD you pick broadneck!? South River is sooo much better, Nyte! D: And you doooo realize that Broadneck is South Rivers rival, right!? D: How could you do this to me!!!!

I love it :)

I love this story already, can't wait for the next update.
I also like how you have displayed both their families role it very discriptive and real.

GOOD CHAPPIE<3 I love you Nyte o.e and I miss the shit tacos outta you, dawg. Just. Im kinda hyper. I had mountain dew, skittles AND COFFEE. Why is James Blunt taking off his clothes in the snow.... ANYWAYS BAI

Love it :)
That song's amazing :)

I love this. :)
update soon?

HOW DID I NOT KNOW YOU HAD A NEW STORY? Seriously omg I am sorry it took me so long to find this.
Anyway
I love it! Gian is adorable <3 and I really love Amren too ( & obviously Treason as well XD I like his name!)
And shkjhgsgm you used a TRS song <3 It made me happy.
Update soon mk? <3