June 17th, 2012 at 10:36pm
Chapter 1: Sneaky girl. She shouldn't make out with people in relationships, but hey, what's being drunk for (?)
Chapter 2: "One preferably with a nice wrack – I was sick of girls with no chest." <-- rack?
I'm hoping he gets some nice character development so he's not just like, a shallow jerkface all the time. I actually had the misfortune of meeting a boy like this. Except he didn't have any character/intelligence, he was just a jerk.
Chapter 3: I definitely sympathize with Florance, but this might stem from the fact that I had a friend who used to hear voices. I say used to because she got the proper help/meds.
Chapter 4: I like Samson. Sorry that's not really a 'real' comment. >_<
Chapter 5: I really like that he's foreign. Or at least his last name sounds foreign.... Székely. I also like the way he describes Andy in the last little paragraph
Now that I have met everyone, I need to go to bed because it's past three in the morning. =]
(Chapter 9) "It was the half-truth, and Samson didn't ate it up (no pun intended)" <-- didn't buy it + ate it up?
(Chapter 13) “Andy doesn’t trust you anymore. You might as well hang out.” <-- up?
(Chapter 14) Oh Cooper.