Loved the update! Hm... Cooper is... interesting. I kind of like her independent vibe. And Toby joining her at lunch sparked an idea... of where exactly this story may lead. But I'll keep it to myself for now, because... yeah, I'm probably way off. Aha. But you guys have me thinking with this story, you really do. :) So... great update! Can't wait for more! :D
Florence sounds curable. I sound like a terrible commenter. I like Cooper and I like Florence and I like Toby's sister and I think I can see Dallas totally falling apart.
Loved the update! :) Hm... so, you gave us some more insight to why Florence is acting the way she is. Not much, but some. But it's leaving me more curious about her character now. Overall, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
Loved the update! So... we found out a little more about the true Dallas, hm? Not much, but some: like for the fact that what Andy said kept bothering him. Hm... poor Cooper, though. :( Great update! You're all doing a wonderful job. :) Can't wait for more! :D
Dallas got really deep. I hate him less now...xD Even though I still think he has some issues for hating on people lesser then him. Coop...poor Coop. :( I'd like to hear more about this little sister of his....(; Loved the chapter, I can't wait for the next one! :D
Loved the update! :) It's sad how Andy's sister's plans just fell through without her control; I can see why Andy is like she is now. And plus, with that, things don't seem to be too good at her home now, either. :( Hm... so overall, interesting update. I think Andy secretly wants Jeremy. lol. Or that's just the hunch I got. :P Or Dallas, maybe. Idk. Great job with the update! And I don't really have a favorite character or characters yet. But I'm sure as you guys continue more with the story I'll know which characters are favorites. :) Can't wait for more! :D
Poor Andy. But, really, she's so real. Her logic on why she drinks and why she doesn't go to class., because of what happened to her sister, it's perfect. It just makes so much sense. Well....it's flawed, but that's what makes it so awesome to read!
Poor Andy. But, really, she's so real. Her logic on why she drinks and why she doesn't go to class., because of what happened to her sister, it's perfect. It just makes so much sense. Well....it's flawed, but that's what makes it so awesome to read!
I really love this(: Andy is such a bad-ass it's ridiculous. "Well fuck a duck" has to be my favorite quote from that chapter(: I love it. Keep on writing!