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  • swell

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    I find it a little weird that Dallas wouldn't know who Florence is considering he's effed Andrea a lot. But I'm defs. warming up to Dallas now, and even though he's a jerk for beating up my favourite character TOBY! I have respect for him just by the way he takes care of his little sister.
    June 30th, 2011 at 12:42pm
  • lifesastoryunwritten

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    i had a feeling it was Florence i can't wait to see where you take their story line :)
    June 30th, 2011 at 10:55am
  • the power of justice

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    Aww, I like Dallas, he' so vulnerable. Ooh, Dallas thinks the school psycho is hot. ;o

    Dun, dun, dun.
    June 30th, 2011 at 08:10am
  • AnAdolescentDreamer

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    I wonder what's gonna happen between Dallas and Florence O:
    June 30th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Only you could make a bad boy so good, Laur. Only you.
    June 30th, 2011 at 01:29am
  • April Showers

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    Him and Florence!
    I knew it...
    June 30th, 2011 at 12:54am
  • break.my.bones

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    Awww Andy has a bit of goodness in her, doesn't she?
    June 27th, 2011 at 02:11am
  • oh bear

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    I like the new layout; I like the update even better. :)
    June 26th, 2011 at 01:02pm
  • the power of justice

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    I really like Andrea. She tries to come off as the party-girl, the carefree b*tch, while in reality, she's a extremely vulnerable girl who is an alcoholic. I really like her caring, kind of protective attitude towards Florence, I find it sweet that she's the it-girl yet she's choosing to be friends with an outcast, a kind of weirdo.

    I gotta say, Andy and Toby are my favourites.
    June 26th, 2011 at 07:12am
  • swell

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    I'm not completely sure why, but Andrea and Toby are my favourites so far.
    Well I know why Toby is my favourite. He reminds me of Steve Erkel, and I loved Steve.
    Anyways, great chapter :)
    June 26th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • Magical Normality

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    I like it.
    June 26th, 2011 at 02:24am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Andrea's chapter really pulled me in. :] Great job, Emily!

    I really like how each of you have your own style and character, instead of one person writing it all. Makes it easier to know their mind and learn the characters faster.

    Next please. :]
    June 26th, 2011 at 12:31am
  • derelict-heart

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    I am seriously so in love with this story. One of the best original works on this site, by far.
    June 26th, 2011 at 12:02am
  • AnAdolescentDreamer

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    Holy crap :D
    I'm definitely in love with Toby <3
    June 25th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • April Showers

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    Still loving this. <3
    I think, out of all the characters, I like Andrea. Every chapter with her, I learn more about her, and I can't help but sympathize and like her as a person.
    June 25th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • break.my.bones

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    actually I changed my mind - Cooper's my favorite, by far
    June 17th, 2011 at 05:05am
  • break.my.bones

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    I'm hoping there's going to be some kind of high school revolt and everyone is just like "screw the stereotypes" ha
    June 17th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • break.my.bones

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    This is awesome :) Florence is my favorite
    June 17th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • catastrophic.love;;

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    Toby is soooo cuteeeee(: I love him. He's hands down my favorite. Update sooon!
    June 12th, 2011 at 06:45pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Hm... you'd think Sonya would be a little more supportive. But I guess she's trying, you can give her that. I guess you can't blame her with the way the social structure is just dominating the school in this story.
    Great update, though. We got another one with Toby. :)
    Can't wait for the next update! :D
    June 11th, 2011 at 11:14pm
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