American Royalty - Comments

Love the new chapter. I will have to say Andrea and Toby are my favirote characters so far.I don't really like Dallas he's an ass.

I love it!!!!

I like the diversity in writing styles - it makes for a good story. My favorite seems to be Toby, the fact that he's old fashion and doesn't know what anything seems to be. Honestly it took me a minute to figure out what the black fuzzy thing was until I was like 'Oh wow, Natasha.' Haha, I like the layout. It's pretty and the banner is gorgeous. I can't wait for more chapters.

Loved the update! Hm... Toby just seems to follow the rules and does what others like him to do. Interesting. Can't wait for the next update! :D

Raff, you have one hell of a writing style. Sticks out. And not in a bad way, nor is it better than the other girls. I dunno what the hell I meant anymore. This cold. I can't believe it got through to my brain.
DO YEH KNOW HOW THICK ME HEAD IS, LAD? PRETTY THICK THERE, SON. AS HARD AS A BONE--The word ends there, perv. ;]
I need Advil mannn.

Sorry this comment is late, guys!

Emily, I loved your chapter. :)
Laura, same here.
And Ara, yours was amazing.
And so was Jay's. :)
And Raff's, yours was hilarious. I love Toby. :)

UPDATE, GUYS. No pressure. :P

Aw...Toby is such a cutie.
Of what nationality does he hail tho?

So happy that there is a chapter for each character now, I´m still looking forward to understand them better. And I cant decide which one I like the best. Huh, I guess I´ll have to think about that later.

I already know I´m going to be in love with this story.

This is really good(: I love the detail, and the depth each character has shown so far. Amazing. I think I like Toby the most...nerds are just adorable. xP
update soon PLEASE! :D

Cooper's kinda cute, if a little of a depressed insomniac... I'm sure she has good reasons.

Loved the update! :D Hm... so is it just the nightmares that are keeping Cooper from sleeping or something else? That's what I'm wondering. Aw, but I loved how Samson was there for her. :) Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Is that really you Jordan haha
So different from everything else you write. I like it. Already like Samson. Loved the truth line. ;]

OH PARANOIA!
Well projected, L. :]

Wow, I love how each character so far has differences between each other. Andrea is spunky and a bit cunning, Dallas is conceited and Florence is so subdued. Can't wait to read the other character's stories, this is going to be awesome!

I think I relate to Florence the most; I like people following the rules and I like a small school. I’m curious to know more about Joseph and this theory about him not wanting her to eat. I love all the personification and similes and just everything, it’s wonderful to read and so flowy too. You have a way with words (:

I noticed one thing: She was a junior like me but act like she was so much more privileged, -- I think it’s supposed to be ‘acted’

So does Florence hallucinate the monsters? Actually sees them, or are they her overactive imagination? And the boy... is he real too, or part of her paranoia? so confused... but poor dear sweet Florence.

More Soon Please!

Loved the update! :D Aw... poor Florence. I am feeling bad for her. :( But now I'm wondering what you're going to have happen to her... and whether it will be good or bad. :o Great update, though. A bit scary... and a little confusing with her thoughts, like with the monsters and all... but intriguing nonetheless. Can't wait for more! :D

oooh.
i like it so far.
cant wait for the next chapter<333

Loved the second update! Hm... Dallas does seem a bit conceited... but that's just going with his character, no? And I like how they all have different personalities. :) I am really in love with this already, and can't wait for the next update! :D

So much detail and reality; I love it! Every little bit of description in this is lovely and I can picture the whole chapter wonderfully. I can tell Andrea is going to be exciting to read about already; the girl already has so much personality in just the first chapter. I seriously can’t think of any criticism (:

Oh gosh, Dallas makes me smile. I like his unique relationship with Gerry the janitor, it added to his character. All the references between Dallas and being King were awesome, I especially liked this line, “I didn’t get called the King for just being the boss of this school and deflowering all the maidens; I got it for dealing out punishments to unsuspecting subjects who didn’t know any better.”

So, I’ve decided that this is without a doubt going to be an amazing story and I am going to be on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. <3