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Just now realized that this story IS completed lol so I guess I can't wait to finish it I just read chapter 8(:

Ch 2: I really like it when people do multiple pov not many people do that anymore it makes I funner to read also I got the sence that oli was faking happy from the beginning and to me that's good when the readers can see into the characters and read them just like the story that they are in I really like this slot and can't wait for you to update even though I haven't got to chapter 18 yet (:

Chapter one: I'm hooked! I may only read a few more chapters tonight because I'm so damn tired but I will try to read up to the last posted chapter tomorrow and I'll be leaving you a lovely comment for every chapter that I read(: I didn't really read all of the prequel but I skimmed it last night just enough out of every chapter after 10 to get a just of what was going on, I hope oli gets better and doesn't end up being the title of the story lol I love it thus far and can't wait to read more!

soo i just stayed up all night just to finish this. i was kind of pissed when i thought he died and id stayed up for shit. but it was great. =}

oooooooohhhhhhh my god! okay, so i finished this.. BEST STORY EVER. it's only midnight and i have school tomorrow, but -HEY- this story completed my life, bro! you know those books that people just HAVE to read before they due? well this falls into that category - even if it's just a short story. DEAR JESUS GOD, THIS WAS EPIC. and yes i do think this highly of a story put up on mibba!!

okay, so i finished up to chapter 9 (i've been quite behind) and i swear to god this is one of the best stories i've ever read. i was telling my dad you know you've encountered an amazing writer and plotline when your stomach actually gets into knots when something bad happens or you don't know if something's gonna work out the way you want it too. jesus god i cannot wait to finish this story!!

You should do a sequel <3

YESSS. I was so scared they weren't going to end up together.
but they did, so i am a happy camper :D
I enjoyed this story, and I'm sad it's ending, but it was great (:

I absolutely loved this story! It was a great story! But i am sad that it's over though.): I was wondering if you were going to make a sequel to this story? Or maybe write an epilogue? Well, this was a grrrrreat story.(:

my all time favorite chapter.ironic since it's the end. i loved that story you've got to do a cute epilogue! it would make me so happy! love. love. love. the part where he comes back was brilliant, it was creative & i was like don't let him be walking into the light or somethingxD glad you didn't kill him off! great story, huge fan(:

Fantastic ending. Very sad to see the story is over, though!

What it's over!? Aw man I can't believe it's over. :( I love this story! I'm glad to see everything is okay now and that they're back together! Such a good ending! XD

That was an awesome chapter, awesome story. I can't believe it's over...

Is there gonna be another sequel? probably not but a girl can hope right?

:D best story that i have ever read

Whoo! He's alive!! :D At least Adi told the truth I feel kinda bad for Jona. I kinda don't want them back together >:L She technically killed Oli grrr

NOT GOING TO LIE... all i wanted to do was skip to the end to see if Oli was alright. I was a trooper though and read through the whole thing bracing myself for what could have been a jaw dropper.
I'm really happy that Oli is still alive and that you updated because I was going crazy wondering...
I'm glad that her and Jonah are done, they were okay together but they weren't right.
Adored the update!
I hope that everything ends up alright for Adi and Oli, i don't know how I'd feel if it just turns out to be a complete MIND FUCK!

Well thank fuck Oli is okay, you had us going for a second there. I'm glad Adi and Jona are finally over, took 'em long enough :)

Awesome update, can't wait for another one

I know youve just updated, but please, update some moreeeeeeee, this is so damn good <3
Im glad things are over with Jona, not to be mean, but Im really happy <3.
Updateeeeeeee, Ill comment a thousand times if you want me to haha !

Haha you're evil! I'm so glad Oli's okay and I'm really really glad Adi finally told Jona the truth! This chapter was so sad but so good. XD I hope things will get better for them. Please update soon!

OMG OMG OMG!
Olis awake!!!
Update soooooon please :(

Oh my fuckin gosh I so thought Oli was a goner:) I am so glad he is alive I want him and her together:D