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  • KatieYDG

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    This was a great update! So much happened. Lol. That dream was pretty intense and scary. I want to feel bad for her but I still think she deserves it for cheating on Jona and treating Oli like shit. I hope she grows up and realizes she needs to start telling the truth and pick one guy.
    March 27th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • CharleeScene.

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    Man, these chapters just keep getting better and better. Please make Oli better, i dont like it when he's drunk and violent and crazed. I just want them to be together :)
    March 27th, 2011 at 03:38am
  • DancingDays

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    Well I guess that's what Adi gets for being a ho ho. In other news YAY update :D. Can't wait for the next one
    March 27th, 2011 at 03:19am
  • all time blow;

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    Poor Oli /
    Poor Jona /

    Adi's kind of a bitch though, doing that to both Jona and Oli. :(
    AHHHH

    Please update soon :) I love this
    March 26th, 2011 at 01:51pm
  • EscapeTheFOB

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    Poor Oli :[
    I feel so bad for him, but I also feel really bad for Jona. he has no idea what's going on and that suckss :/
    March 23rd, 2011 at 08:57pm
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    wow. i can't believe they'd do this to each other again. it's awful...
    loved the update , FULL of drama! canlt wait to read more.
    March 23rd, 2011 at 02:39am
  • what's the story?

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    I'm a new reader :)
    Oli was kinda scary, but then again, Adi's kind of being a bitch (no offense to you) screwing around with Oli's and Jonah's emotions like that
    March 22nd, 2011 at 02:40am
  • xXxBethaneexXx

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    OMG!!
    that was insane :D
    who knew oli was agressive like that :p
    pleeeeease update soon! i wanna see them get back together already :3
    March 22nd, 2011 at 12:33am
  • DancingDays

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    I love this update. I enjoy a violent Oli...
    Shake my head at Adi though.
    More updates X3
    March 21st, 2011 at 12:23pm
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    I never expected Oli to be so violent and hateful.
    Adi needs to stop screwing around with people's emotions.
    None the less, this was a great chapter.
    March 21st, 2011 at 05:54am
  • CharleeScene.

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    HOLY SHIT!! I never thought Oli would've done that. As said before Adi does deserve it, she's been a right little brat.
    Please dont make Oli some crazed alco druggie, pretty pretty pretty please :D
    March 21st, 2011 at 05:32am
  • KatieYDG

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    OMG Oli! I'm so speechless.... I can't believe he did that. :o She kind of deserved it though. She keeps cheating on Jona and breaking poor Oli's heart. :( I wonder what's going to happen next. I have a feeling Oli might tell everyone what she's been doing behind Jona's back.
    March 21st, 2011 at 05:15am
  • celinasmile

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    ahhhh omg i love this i love this i love this!! it's like my favorite! omg i might cry if oli and adi don't end up together by the end. literally, i might cry. omg omg omg so good <3333

    and thanks for the shoutout!! :D
    March 21st, 2011 at 01:32am
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    oh, snap! wasn't expecting that.
    can't wait to see if she actually goes through with the break up, and how that goes.
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • EscapeTheFOB

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    Adi is really a bitch...I can't believe she would do that to Jona :/
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:21am
  • KatieYDG

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    She's gonna break up with Jona!? I'll believe it when I see it. Lol. I really hope she does though and isn't just messing with Oli.
    March 20th, 2011 at 03:20am
  • xXxBethaneexXx

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    omg, i just started reading these stories and i love them(:
    please update soon
    March 19th, 2011 at 09:28pm
  • DancingDays

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    Yay update. I wish it was longer though >.<.
    I feel bad for Jona D: but yay Oli...kinda? :D
    March 19th, 2011 at 09:26am
  • CharleeScene.

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    Ohhhhhh, i wonder what'll happen in the next chapter.....

    Update again soon :D
    March 19th, 2011 at 08:18am
  • KatieYDG

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    Hm, I can tell Adi still loves Oli. As much as I like Jona, she needs to go back to Oli.
    March 17th, 2011 at 04:05pm
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