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I really hope Oli makes it. :( Adi better feel guilty too. She needs to realize she's messing Oli up. Its good to know she cares enough to fly all the way back there to make sure he's okay. Great chapter as always! Update soon :)

Please let Oli be okay.

My face was practiclly glued to the screen while reading this chapter. This has got to be one of THE best stories i have read in a long time :D

AHHH !!!!!! I CRIED WHILE READING CHAPTER 13 !!!!!

Oli and Adi HAVE to be together :(

D': noooo :O

oh my this is fucking brilliant I love it:) I think its is one of the best stories I have read:)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Why, why are they getting married. This cannot be happening right now D:
major major major sad face.

OMG!!!
theyre getting married ?! :o
i so hate u right now >.< poor oli!

UGH poor Oli! Damn, can't the poor boy get a break from this bitch!? Haha, this chapter made me so angry and sad. But yet I loved it. XD I really really really don't like Adi. She's mean and Oli just needs to move on, she's not worth it. =/ I saw the new BMTH video and it's freaken amazing! Oh also, I saw BMTH 2 weeks ago and the whole time I was standing between Oli and Jona. Perfect <3 Please update soon!

I cannot believe they let Oli get drunk and I certainly cannot believe he just told Jona everything. A part of me hopes that Jona doesn't believe him because I like having Adi and Jona together... but another part of me thinks it's time she comes clean. This chapter was amazing!

BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!! Holy crap balls!! that was amazing, i'm glad that Jona knows the truth now :D hehe update again soon x

Yes! Go Oli! I'm so proud of him. XD I hope Jona believes everything Oli said about him and Adi, and then leave her. :) Haha I'm glad Matt is on Oli's side or at least understands that Adi treats Oli like shit. I can't wait for the next update!

i laughed the whole way through that chapter, i don't know if you intended for it to be funny but i found the table scene hilarious & the fact that matt & tom sandwiched him in bedxD i laughed like a crazy person. the ending was sad though. i wanted to hug matt & oli both they seemed to pitiful & sweet. love. love. love. i don't comment enough, it's okay you can hate me, i'll try harder from now on. i just usually only have enough time to read it & i swear i'll comment later but i forget until the next update & the cycle begins again. no excuses, im a terrrible person. okay, well this was a super long comment. longest i've ever left for anyone. LOVE THIS STORY!!! bye(:

That was freaking AMAZINGGG. I love Oli and Matts relationship. Update soon!

Oh man oh man. Update soon, pleasee.

:O ohhhhhh daaamn
definitely can't wait for the next one, biggest cliffhanger ever

This story is so awesome. I've been reading it since the beginning yesterday and I haven't been able to stop. I really don't like Adi at this point. She's terrible for how she treats Jona and Oli. Instead of judging the mistakes Oli makes, she needs to take a look at herself because she is the cause of it all. I feel bad for Oli. I love this, though! :)

The last two chapters were awesome!!! Poor Oli, i hope he's gonna be okay. :D

Oh no Oli! I hope he's okay. Ha, he slept with Lacey. I hope Adi finds out :) She's so stupid! If I was Oli, I would tell Jona that Adi's been cheating on him. XD That'd be a great way to piss her off.

OMG!! I totally love it!!
keep up the awesome work! :D
i cant wait till they get back together :3

I can't believe Jona punched Oli. He kind of deserved it, though. Hes going crazy.
Can't wait until the next update, I love this!

i can't wait to see what happens when jona finds out...
that will be explosive.
great update!