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  • CharleeScene.

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    Please tell me that Oli isnt dead, he cant be dead!!!!

    Awesome update, it was so intense and awesomely written :D
    April 14th, 2011 at 05:39am
  • Cupcakes.are.emo.2

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    Tell me chapter 16 isn't the last!! :( It makes me so sad! That's a mean way to end this story!!!!
    April 12th, 2011 at 04:23am
  • Mandababiee

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    This is sad. :'(
    April 11th, 2011 at 04:38am
  • ChristyRawr

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    Amazing story the last few chapters were soooo sad I cried like four times. Please don't make it a sad ending I don't think I could take it.
    April 11th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • all time blow;

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    Oh.My.God. He better not die D:

    please don't let him die, that would just be depressing :(
    April 10th, 2011 at 02:39pm
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    kay! so i'm REALLY NOT too keen on accepting that he's dead...
    i would love it if that wasn't the end and if it wasn't then i really, really don't want to see the end be his funeral because that would simply destroy me.
    DON'T DESTROY ME!!!!
    please?!
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    April 10th, 2011 at 11:03am
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    If he dies, I swear I'll die. This chapter was intense. Definitely a tear jerker.
    April 10th, 2011 at 04:45am
  • alisz x

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    You lady are fucking amazing, please dont make him die, I actually had tears in my eyes while reading this, pleaseeeeeeeeee im begging you ):
    April 10th, 2011 at 04:31am
  • Kylene

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    he can't die! bring him back. let it be a dream. i don't care if a unicorn gives him a magic sugar cube. just don't let him die! he's oli sykes, he'll never die(: love.
    April 10th, 2011 at 02:34am
  • Kylene

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    he can't die! bring him back. let it be a dream. i don't care if a unicorn gives him a magic sugar cube. just don't let him die! he's oli sykes, he'll never die(: love.
    April 10th, 2011 at 02:33am
  • DancingDays

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    O______O OLI DIDN'T DIE! D: OMFG NO!!! I hope there's a twist to this <_<
    April 10th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • KatieYDG

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    ........Oh no, you did not just end the chapter like that.. I need to know if Oli's okay! He better not really be dead. -_- I can't believe you're leaving me hanging like this! XD This was so so so sad. :( Ohhh you better update soon!
    April 9th, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • xXxBethaneexXx

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    OMG!
    u better not end it here D:<
    Oli can't die just like that!!
    Him and Adi have to be together! >.<
    April 9th, 2011 at 11:51pm
  • EscapeTheFOB

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    Please don't let Oli dieee :[ I want him and Adi to be together!
    April 9th, 2011 at 11:04pm
  • Just.A.Cupcake.Lover

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    nooooooo! how could you end it like that? now i'm gonna be dying to know what he was going to say to her.
    dang.
    oh momma! i can't wait. update soon!
    April 8th, 2011 at 09:19am
  • CharleeScene.

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    Wow!! Cliffhanger much.... hehehe :D

    Awesome update. please update again soon, i need to know what happens :D
    April 8th, 2011 at 08:36am
  • KatieYDG

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    Good Oli woke up. :) I wonder how Oli knew Adi was even there. Or why he even wants to talk to her. :/
    April 8th, 2011 at 06:21am
  • Kylene

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    NO! you have to update, i need to know what happens. it's so sad but i love it. don't kill him, it'll break my little heart): they hafta be together! there's no other way... pretty pretty please update soon. im dying(: excellent as always.
    April 8th, 2011 at 05:58am
  • xXxBethaneexXx

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    OMGGGGGG!
    whats oli gonnas ay to her?! omg cant wait till the next chapter!
    April 8th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • DancingDays

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    Oh my effing geezus cliff hanger chapter D:. You tease!!!
    April 8th, 2011 at 05:15am
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