Haha, I love her banter with Garrett... they're just so cute and awkward together. Kyla seriously reminds me of Brooke from One Tree Hill, it's uncanny.
You always seem to amaze me with how beautifully you write. I can't even tell you how excited I am for more of this. I really liked Bear, He made me smile and I think he's an interesting character. But I really can't wait to see how you write everything out. I hope everything gets better with your family! <3
holy crap. i am SO GLAD you updated, you literally just made my life so much better!! I love this whole Bear thing, its really cool, and garrett is my hero! Though as always john... is charming old john haha. I think that no matter what you write, we will love it!! so just keep doing it if you want to! But i really did love reading this! <3
No need to be nervous. This came out as I knew it would. You followed your instincts and it paid off in the end. This chapter is well done. You left me with an anxious desire to know what's happening with John. ;) but you also took what you'd originally had and delivered. And I mean truly delivered. You captured the feelings between Ky and Blake and the friendship and potential one sided ~thing with Gar while giving the audience exactly enough information to keep them sated and wanting all at the same time.
I'm glad to see that you're back, and I really enjoyed this chapter! I hope that you start to feel better, I know how the whole family issues go. Doing things you love and hanging with people you love make it a whole lot better. That is my completely un-sage advice. And again, really enjoyed reading your writing again!
Awwww Garrett and Blake! I'm excited for them, if there even is a 'them' I'm sorry about the family stuff, but I hope that writing helps you and I hope that you're back 100% but if not, I understand why. Great chapter!
I thought my eyes were deceiving me when I got the email informing me about an update. I'm so glad you didn't completely abandon us just yet. I'm sorry about the family stuff. I hope you get through it alright. Take as much time as you need! The update was great! Something is always better than nothing. It gives us some glimmer of hope that you won't quit on us! Haha I hope things turn up better and easier for you! :)
I'm glad to have you back and the chapter was amazing. I like the little background in the beginning, real subtle. Garrett likes to pop up out of no where. I loved it. :)
Ack, you updated! Love it! And loved the chapter! More insight into the characters. I definitely loved it and cannot wait for more!!! Update again soon please!!!
girl, i missed you. seriously, i think i enjoy reading you more than dessen. i wouldn't even care if your stories weren't fanfictions. even if you replaced garrett with some guy named ralph, i'd still love this story (provided ralph looked, spoke, and acted like garrett...).
anyway, i liked this chapter. kyla (although a bit spazzy) thinks just like me: always reading too deeply into a boy's actions. i also loved that cute moment between blake and gare at the cleaners. sometimes boys just can't read sarcasm....
so please please please keep posting. there's no better way to be cheered up than with the praise and support coming from us - your loyal readers. =)
Sorry to hear about your family troubles hopefully everything gets better soon! Just thought I'd let you know that I love it when you update! I'm like a kid on Christmas morning! Lol
I loved this update, especially the conversation in the car. When Kyla asked about the blog I died laughing haha. I love how real your characters always feel.
I'm sorry to hear about your family/troubles. I hope everything gets better soon, whatever it is that's going on.
I was looking forward to this chapter for so long. "...seductively trying to eat a piece of celery." This was probably the best eight words in the chapter. Also loved the whole car conversation, and how low Blake's expectations of Garrett are.
I don't know why you were nervous because this was GOOD! Kyla is getting on my nerves. She's... Pushy. So I see why Blake's getting upset with her, or annoyed even. But one thing I did like about Kyla was her reaction to the mixed CD, probably because I would have been the same way. Haha :)
And as always, you know I'm a text away -- anytime, any place -- if you need to talk. Always, bby girl. Love you!