Fate Works Both Ways - Comments

Meeh, Garrett is cool, but I'd like to get rid of John please? And girl, you have a way with words, awesome chapter!

Wow, the difference between John and Garrett's personalities in this and Collide. The way you're shaping your characters is amazing, even if I do want to throw my copy of Discipline and Punish at John who seems to really know how to play his cards when it comes to getting into a girl's head. And Garrett is just so sweet with the candy and making Blakely a mix cd. So yeah... I love the library scene for obvious reasons, but I can't wait when the whole Blakely/Kyla/John thing goes down. I'm so excited for this, it's unreal.

I really like your writing. It's very well planned and descriptive. I enjoyed this chapter. I'm quite nervous for her about Brown. I can't wait to read more. I really hope that Kyla doesn't find out about Blake and John because I somehow feel like she would be very upset about that. But, at the same time, I know that eventually it has to come out. Garrett is adorable so far. I can't wait to see how the relationship between the two of them grows and changes.

I really like this story...great job and hopefully you'll update soon

asdadafagfg. Garrett's such a sweeeetheart. Makes me a little depressed with my life. gah!

Is it wrong that as much as John is being a jerk, asshole, player, dickhead (that he is), I still enjoy his character, and reading him. Like, I actually smiled and felt all giddy when he 'talked' to Blakely. Yes, crazy.

OMG, please update soon. SOON! i'm begging you!

oh god, she's so dramatic. i love it.
and Garrett. that Garrett. oh Garrett Garrett Garrett. he's just too adorable like ugh when he's all sweet and adorable it kind of kills me and I'm all NO STOP THAT but that I get all DKJLFKG OHMYGOD and sort of die. Attractive and sweet... goddddddddddddd, so cruel.
I love Johno already. And Kyla. And everything about this story and I just about died at the interview I was so nervous she was gonna talk about her panties and that would have just killed me with second embarrassment.
Yeah. I'm half exhausted and half flaily. bad combo. really bad combo. especially if Garrett is cute and sweet and dkfjsdfglsdf and everything else he is is around.

garrett is so adorable in this, i love it

wow. i thought i was high strung. but her whole little rant over ruining getting into brown makes me look like the most carefree person in the world.

and i already adore garrett. he is just too cute for words.
especially here:
I crinkled my eyebrows as I opened my eyes, a smile pulling at the corners of my mouth when I saw the neon yellow wrapper sitting in front of me. “You… You bought me a Charleston Chew?”

He smiled back. “Well, I told you I would. I like to keep my promises. It’s good karma.”

I didn’t hesitate to open it, ripping the wrapper in half before shoving the candy in my mouth. The least I could do was eat my feelings.

“I also made you this.”

I was mid chew when I glanced up at him. He had his hand extended over the table, a cd case laced in his fingers.

already, he's perfect.

aaaaand john... well i'm not entirely sure what to expect from him yet. i'll just have to wait and see.

all of the comments above me, i am in utter agreement. And this mix cd, it's the one with the tracks in the summary, correct?
i need moreee :D i hope she got into Brown!

Even if you make Garrett out to be the smokin', bike riding, cursing bad boy(though I don't think I came across any), I'll always think he's sweet.
But please, no need for a bad guy now. Gar is meant to be sweet, y'all.
I love their interactionsss.
AND JOHN IS ALWAYS JOHN, A PERVE AND A PLAYA. I can't remember a time when he wasn't. :]

I love Blake's character! AND you are awesome!

i really like this story :) Garrett has a great sense of humour, as does Blake. It's a real credit to the autor to make it humourous and interesting at the same time, without being cliche

“You’re getting kind of emotional right now, Blake.”
Hhahahah.

GARRETT IS SO SWEET, CHARLESTON CHEW AND A MIX CD. JOHN, GO AWAY YOU AND YOUR ARUBA MESS.

I love this.

You're so cute Ashley.
I love this story. (:

hahah oooomg john i can already tell you're going to be a douchebag in this story.
you make me love garrett more and more each time!!! <3

I rolled my eyes. “I’ll rephrase: I don’t have time to have meaningless sex with a guy who drives a yellow car.”

You sure know how to make a person laugh so hard they snort whipped cream. xDDD
ANYWAYS.
I loved this with a burning, fiery passion!
It was so funny, it put me in a great mood while doing my homework, if that's even possible(x
AS;LDKFJA;SLDKJF; ALSKDJF;ALSDK
Garrett's so sweet(:
A Charleston Chew, AND a mixed CD! :DDD
ahhhhhhhhh.<3
update soon, please?(:
I can't wait for the next update!

I should be finishing chemistry homework or studying for spanish. But, oh well oh well oh well. This story makes me smile already and its only just begun. Can't wait for more more. Oh, and John's a douche, but you already knew that :]

The Charleston Chew. The mixtape. The Charleston Chew. The mixtape. The Charleston Chew. The mixtape.
Garrett is too sweet. I'm just gonna sit here and laugh uncontrollably when he confesses his feelings but then he finds out John already tapped that.

john, you pig.
and i liked what blakely(i can't spell sorry) said bout brown
and hi cute garrettt, how are ya? bhahahahaah

Garrett is so cute! :) I'm stoked for the next chapter. <3