Fate Works Both Ways - Comments

I can't begin to put in words how much I like this. :)

i love this! i think im team garrett...
even though i do love me some john<3

John is a dirty slut! Lol......Garrett is very cute in this story not so moody! ;)

this whole chapter was amazing.
i love john's character. it's so different from the way he was in collide.
and garrett's character is amazing. he's snarky and cute at the same time.
i really do hope she gets into brown. i didn't think her answer was all that bad.

You are not going to fail.
I swear, you're more like Blakely than you know. Both of you darling sweethearts are dramatic.
And me saying this makes me like Garrett, which is a little disconcerting because I'd love to do unmentionable things to him.

Moving on. I love this. Your transitions are brilliant, and I can see now what you were saying about John's character. It's instinct for me to think of him as the older brother, protective type from Collide, but I hate him. I think he's an arrogant asshole, who knows how to get exactly into Blake's head. ldfkj I wanna stab him. I do.

dfsklj So excited for the mixes, btw. Gar is so adorable, I swear. I love how he's almost sassy in this, the way he teases her about being dramatic and whining. I love their obvious chemistry, even so early on. It's brilliant.

And I'm running on basically no sleep and I completely forgot what I was gonna say here. Hmm.
I don't even remember. If I do, I'll let you know.

As usual, this is beautiful. Even if you didn't have time to edit/etc like you wanted. I love it nonetheless.

Lovinggggg this!
Ahh I'm so excited.

SOMEONE PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME WHY THERE ARE FOUR CHAPTERS OF THIS AND I DIDN'T KNOW BECAUSE MIBBA DEACTIVATED MY SUBSCRIPTION.
BULLSHIT.

I couldn't help but think it. I kind of like Kyla's free spirit attitude, but she does remind me of Brooke from One Tree Hill. Anyway... I love where this story is headed, and I can't wait for it to all unfold.

I dont really like this Kyla character. I know every story needs some kind of loose, I-don't-care-what-people-say-so-I'll-sleep-around friend, but constantly ditching her best friend for guys and then holding extremely high expectations of the main character and making her look like some kind of priss all the time? I'm getting kind of sick of this types.
Love the story though, can't wait to see how this will all turn out.

So this Gar isn't heartbroken nor taken? Eep.
Consider Collide halfway to the back of my head. :]
I really likey!

oh i had a feeling Kyla's bf was going to be the guy she slept with! I like Blake's character!

Umm...WOW...I wasn't expecting that at all. I'm really starting to like this story...a lot. :-)

Boo, I was starting to like Ky. Sucks that she dies. :(

You have no idea how much in need of this I was. I was getting mind raped (not fucked, because that sounds like a good thing..) by all the things I needed to get done in the short amount of time that I currently have.

I'm excited for this because I'm sure you've gotten the hang of the whole story writing, with Close and Collide done and everything. :) I can't wait for all that's in store. :D I'm literally, ready to pee my pants because of the mere thought haha.

ps: Dude, my fist is the first down that throat. Just sayin'.

AH THE FUCKERY.

HOW COME I DON'T GET EMAILS FOR THESE UPDATES??? EXPLAIN THAT.

I'm going to go read this and digest this before coming to scream about this fuckery. -_-

have i told you that i love this? kyla is just idk something irks me about her. she just doesn't care. and you know she's gonna drop blakely when she finds out about the whole sex on the beach thing.
and then garrett gots a 'tude!

I was NOT expecting that! But it was great, and it really does clear up the story for me! I can already feel the drama that is going to happen once mystery Aruba man is out in the open! and garret, my favorite person of ever, being the best guy. I love him. :)

This chapter clears up the description of the story! This is so amazing. I'm really excited for the rest of it.

I KNEW IT.

I'm worried about the whole Blakely/John/Kyla thing. But I'm also very excited about Garrett. He seems really sweet in this story...I guess that didn't get us very far in Close/Collide, but I have a feeling he's going to be a shoulder to cry on slash good friend for Blakely for awhile, before we get to the romance. I guess what I'm trying to say is we still have to deal with the "love triangle" before we can get to Garrett and Blakely's main storyline, y'know? And then of course Kyla's death; that has to fit in here somewhere.

Put simply, I'm extremly, extremely excited for this!

I see muchos shit hitting a very big fan in the near to far furure?
*is excited*