All I Wanted Was the Truth - Comments

Um...weird...sort of boring. I don't entirely get the point of the story.

I loved the story! Then it ended and now I am pissed and sad! :) But it was still a good story,,,,,,,but one more chapter would be nice:)

So...definitely loved this story. Cried at the end. Bummer. But you are a terrific writer!

D: i loved the story it was amazing
but i didnt like the ending o__________o poor kaya and poor emmett

he killed her... my bottom lip is quivering right now.
that was sooo good. i still can't believe he killed her. you killed her. scoff
that was really good, though. i hate how good you are at writing. >: P

please please please please please please make an epilogue were emmet goes back to his family clutching her body for dear life please that would make an awesome ending an awesome story

Iis there gonna be a sequel . . . . . did she turn into a vamp i didnt understand the ending

I do love this. But at the end, I had stayed up 'till two in the morning. This is my immediate reaction:

"WHAT!?!? SHE'S DEAD?"

Then I slapped my hand over my mouth.

"Becca! GET TO BED!"

That would be my mom. Lovely story. Gotta go.

aww dan that was sad.
:'(

Wow..i like how you are putting a different perspective in here from Twilight.
*subscribe*
more please?

Sorry I didn't comment the last few chapters. I had no internet D:
It was a really good story. I'm sad she died at the end though =[

that ending made me cry...it was still one of the best stories I've read on here.

love ur story it was amazing i couldnt stop reading it..it had a really sad ending but it was amazing

Hello.
Really great story. Your grammar is great and the correct spelling is all there.
I look forward to reading more in the future. =)

Luego, ~Isabel

It keeps getting better and better!!!! keep it up!!

This made me laugh, its just so easy going. It's good

this is really good. :)

This is really well written. Keep it up. It's not 'shoddy', like some of the Twilight 'spin-offs'
Well done. I look forward to the next chapter.

omg that was so good!!!

ahhh ive read the whole twilight series and cant wait for breaking dawn. and omfg THANK YOU!!! i am soooo sick of bellas pov!!!! seriously after uv read the series 5x u get totally sick of her. have u notice shes always so grumpy, or complaining or pissed of cos edward wont tell her something or always wanting something or bored or trying to rape edward? she is never truly happy, then how she kisses jacob- dnt evev go there. but it is so good reading from sumone elses perspective!!! haha i LOVED it!!!! oh oh and i wish it was actually in the book!!!! i loved reading emmets pov aswell. its cool how u had both kayas and emmets, stephenie shud of done that a bit.

xoxox

p.s. comment me when u write the next chapter :D:D:D

This is so interesting! I love it.
More when you get back from camping please?