All I Wanted Was the Truth - Comments

  • iliveontightwadhill

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    WOW. this is really really really good. It gives me a new perspective on the books.
    How creepy would it be to go up to someones house and have them go "We have been expecting you."
    It's awesome, update soon
    April 7th, 2008 at 10:05am
  • Doe28

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    Thanks to you I reread Twilight xD
    Now I have more clarity as to what happens and when.
    I liked the update. =]
    More soon?
    April 7th, 2008 at 03:01am
  • Blue Eyed Wolf

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    Keep em comin!! this story has got me hooked!
    April 6th, 2008 at 03:47pm
  • Doe28

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    I was kind of iffy about reading this at first but I'm glad I did because I really like it =]
    It's nice seeing things from a different point of view. Makes me want to reread Twilight also.
    More when you can.
    April 6th, 2008 at 04:52am
  • tifany0reck

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    i love your story!
    April 6th, 2008 at 04:47am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Sorry I haven't commented in ages! I haven't had time to go on the computer.

    Oooooh! I want more!

    More more more more more!

    Soon? Please?
    March 24th, 2008 at 08:56am
  • Blue Eyed Wolf

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    I must keep reading!!! this is sooo good!!
    March 23rd, 2008 at 11:08pm
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Woop woop!

    I wondered what his secret was! I thought he was a machine or something.

    More soon?
    March 16th, 2008 at 03:16am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Ooh!

    What's the deal with Emmet?

    I WANNA KNOOOOW!!!

    XD

    More soon?
    March 10th, 2008 at 06:50am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Hmmm... Little suggestion: If it's going to be that long, you might consider making it a story of its own?

    Just a suggestion.

    Ooh. I know a girl like 'Bella Swan. I can't quite place what it is that makes me dislike her. It's just... her.

    Dammit, what's Emmet's secret?

    I (as always) eagerly await more.
    March 2nd, 2008 at 09:22am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Woop woop!

    I like it. I don't know anything about these characters, so let's see if your writing skills can reveal them to me without going into "descriptiony flashback" mode.

    I eagerly await more.
    February 29th, 2008 at 05:31am
  • Monkey-Turtle

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    Ooooh! I like it, I like it, I do! You have inspired me. I have subscribed to this, and I eagerly await more.

    One-shots are good. They can be frustrating in their incomplete-ness, but when written well (and this one is) they are brilliant.

    It's a relief to FINALLY find someone on Mibba who actually has good grammar and actually writes well. There are so many people who just don't bother.

    :D I look forward to more.
    January 29th, 2008 at 11:22pm